Based on the short story by John Polidori
written by Glen Eric Reed

 

FADE IN:

EXT. MERCER BUILDING - EVENING

Dusk approaching on a dreary, foggy day. A FULL MOON is barely
visible through the mist. A soft rain falls outside the
building - the private residence of Lord and Lady Mercer - as
a small coach led by a single horse approaches.

TITLE CARD: "London, February 1819"

As the coach comes to a stop, its door has already been opened
from the inside by WILLIAM AUBREY, a tall, conservatively
dressed man in his early twenties. William exits the coach and
reaches back to assist his sister, MARY, a strong-willed and
beautiful 17-year-old.

INT. FOYER - EVENING

Inside, o.s., GUESTS are CHATTERING and LAUGHING and a STRING
QUARTET plays Baroque MUSIC. A SERVANT takes the coats and
other accouterments from William and his sister as they
continue an argument:

                         WILLIAM (to Mary)
               And I should be back home, planning
               my trip. I tell you, the only
               reason I came here is -

                         MARY
               The only reason you came here was
               because I dragged you here!

                         WILLIAM
               I only came here to see Christian.
               And I might say the same for you.
               The two of you shouldn't be
               carrying on as you do, you know ... 
               you really should have a proper
               presentation.

                         MARY
               Yes, yes, after your trip, when I'm
               18 years of age. Just because I
               haven't been presented does not
               mean Christian and I can't enjoy
               each other's company, my dear
               brother.

William and Mary walk toward the entrance of the drawing room,
but are stopped before they can enter by William's friend
CHRISTIAN.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Master Aubrey! And the charming
               Mary! Excellent to see you again,
               my friends. I'm sure Lady Mercer
               will be thrilled to see you at her
               drawing-room.

William smiles broadly.

                         WILLIAM
               Oh, she might ... if she knew me!

                         CHRISTIAN
               Well, I'd introduce you myself if I
               could only find her. But who needs
               Lady Mercer when we are graced with
               the presence of such beauty in your
               sister?

                         WILLIAM
               Christian....

                         MARY
               Brother, if you stop him now, I
               swear that I'll never forgive you.

The three join in LAUGHTER at Mary's comment. Christian leads
the group into the drawing room.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Honestly, the two of you....
                    (pause)
               Come, let's join the crowd.

INT. DRAWING ROOM - EVENING

The drawing room is packed. A few guests are dancing, some are
TALKING, some are drinking, and some simply enjoy the MUSIC of
the quartet.

LADY MERCER chats with a MYSTERIOUS MAN. The man sits in a
plush velvet chair; his hair is long, dark brown, and streaked
with grey, although he still appears youthful. His eyes show
no emotion.

                         LADY MERCER
               So, milord, do you plan to stay
               with us through the whole evening
               tonight, or sneak off per usual?

The mysterious man smiles, though his eyes do not seem to
share the gesture.

                         MYSTERIOUS MAN
               We'll just have to see how things
               progress, Lady Mercer.

                         LADY MERCER
               Well, I'm sure you can find
               something to suit your fancy. We
               seem to have quite an interesting
               crowd tonight.

                         MYSTERIOUS MAN
               Aye, that you do. But then, when
               have your drawing-rooms not
               produced a most interesting crowd?

                         LADY MERCER
               Ah, but you flatter me, you
               scoundrel. I'd swear it was you
               they all came to see.

                         MYSTERIOUS MAN
               Oh, surely I can't be quite so
               interesting.

A chair opens up next to the mysterious man. Lady Mercer
daintily lowers herself into it and leans close to him.

                         LADY MERCER
               To me, you're the most interesting
               man here.

INT. DRAWING ROOM - LATER THAT EVENING

In another area of the drawing room, William, Mary, and
Christian are smiling and LAUGHING, apparently at William's
expense.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Oh, old reliable "Oxford Aubrey." I
               tell you, Mary, you brother's a
               great friend, but not the best at
               conversation.

                         WILLIAM
               Well, you still must admit, it
               is quite warm for this time
               of year.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Maybe so, Aubrey, but I haven't
               seen you for eight months, and
               that's the best you could do for
               conversation?

                         WILLIAM
               You may not be seeing much of me,
               but you're certainly seeing more
               than enough of my sister.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Enough, William. You know very well
               that this isn't the place to
               discuss my involvement with Mary. I
               mean, if you'd only have taken an
               appropriate moment to talk with me.

                         MARY
                    (overlapping)
               Oh, you mustn't treat him so
               harshly, Christian. My brother has
               been so busy lately, he hardly even
               has time to talk with me.

                         WILLIAM
               I will always have time for you,
               Dearheart. After all, you're the
               only family I have.

Christian SMILES.

                         CHRISTIAN
               All right, all right, enough of
               this blathering sentimental
               nonsense. What exactly has made you
               so busy you haven't had time for a
               visit to Birmingham? These days, I
               do see Mary more than I see you.
               Not that I don't enjoy every minute
               of that, of course. But she's not
               one to speak of her pig-headed
               brother often.

                         MARY
               He hasn't told you his plans?

                         CHRISTIAN
               He hasn't spoken to me!

                         WILLIAM
               As Mary said, I've been busy,
               Chris. I'm planning a trip abroad.

                         CHRISTIAN
               All right, now that would certainly
               explain it. Where are you planning
               to go?

                         WILLIAM
               Well, that remains undecided.

                         MARY
               I think he's just waiting for
               someone to whisk him off and
               tell him where to go.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Oh, come on now, Aubrey, don't you
               know it's you that's supposed to do
               the whisking? At this rate, you'll
               never find yourself a companion for
               your old age!

                         MARY
               Why do you think I keep forcing him
               to go to these drawing-rooms?

                         WILLIAM
               I don't really think women make the
               best travel companions anyway.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Oh? And why is that, my friend?

                         MARY
               Yes, William, my dear brother - why
               is that?

The crowd has begun to thin out; people are moving to the
dining area, o.s. The atmosphere has become more relaxed and
the music is down to one VIOLIN.

Lady Mercer and the mysterious man are now visible from the
vantage of Christian and Mary, but not from that of William,
as his back is turned. Lady Mercer is practically in the
mysterious man's lap - he, however, seems quite uninterested.

                         WILLIAM
               Oh, I don't want to get into this
               discussion again, Mary. Women are
               simply less well fit for travel.

Mary notices Lady Mercer.

                         MARY
               Well that one certainly is!

William starts to turn around, but Christian grabs his arm.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Careful, Aubrey, wouldn't want to
               be rude, now. It seems Mary has
               found our gracious hostess.

                         MARY
               That is Lady Mercer? She
               doesn't seem like much of a lady to
               me.

                         WILLIAM
               Why? What is she doing?

                         MARY
               Nearly everything but removing all
               her clothing and straddling that
               man!

                         WILLIAM
               Mary!

Christian can't help but burst into UPROARIOUS LAUGHTER at
Mary's comment. Hearing the laughter, and sensing an
opportunity for escape, the mysterious man looks up.

Lady Mercer, caught being less than ladylike, stands and
rushes out of the drawing room.

                         MARY
               Who is that man? People have been
               flocking to him since we arrived.

William turns around, no longer able to suppress his
curiosity. The mysterious man stands and begins to walk to the
trio.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Well, he's on his way over. It will
               be my pleasure to introduce you.

The mysterious man arrives, with an expression on his face
almost approaching jovial. William is completely transfixed by
the man's appearance, unable to divert his eyes or remove the
inquisitive look from them.

                         MYSTERIOUS MAN
               Good Christian, how does this
               evening find you?

                         CHRISTIAN
               Quite well, Vincent, as always.
               Please, let me introduce a friend
               from my days at university, William
               Aubrey, and his enchanting sister
               Mary. Aubrey, Mary ... this
               incredibly handsome man is Lord
               Vincent Ruthven.

Mary suppresses a GIGGLE. Ruthven LAUGHS outright, but his
eyes continue to show nothing.

                         RUTHVEN
               Oh, you make me out to be more than
               I am, sir. Don't rely on his words
               as a measure of my attractiveness.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Of course not.
                    (pause)
               Rely on the ladies that seem to
               fall at his feet at every drawing
               -room.

William finally seems to break out of his trance.

                         WILLIAM
               Well, regardless of your relative
               attractiveness, it is a pleasure to
               make your acquaintance, milord.

                         RUTHVEN
               Oh, please ... call me "Ruthven" or
               "Vincent." I do so hate being
               called "lord"; it implies an
               undeserved superiority.

                         MARY
               And what makes you think you do not
               deserve it?

                         RUTHVEN
               Well, aren't you quite the little
               inquisitive one?

                         WILLIAM
               You'll have to excuse my sister,
               Ruthven. She has had the benefit of
               little supervision other than my
               own, and I'm afraid I haven't done
               a very good job of it.

                         RUTHVEN
               Oh? I'm not so sure of that.

                         MARY
               I'm not so sure he ever supervised
               me.

                         CHRISTIAN
               I'm not so sure you can be
               supervised, Mary. But I know I
               wouldn't mind being the one to try!

William shoots Christian a glance. The four guests are now the
only ones to remain in the drawing room. Everyone else has
entered the dining room, and SERVANTS have begun to clean the
area.

                         RUTHVEN
               There are some people who were
               never meant to be supervised.
               Though my sympathy goes with those
               who still attempt to control.

                         CHRISTIAN
               And who can help but succumb to
               your control, Ruthven? Come, my
               friends, to the dining room. I must
               tell you how I came to meet this
               most intriguing fellow.

INT. DINING ROOM - NIGHT

This room is enormous, even more grand than the drawing room.
The string quartet is here, playing SOFT MUSIC in the
background.

A large, rectangular table around which many guests are seated
dominates the center of the room. LORD MERCER sits at the head
of this table, but Lady Mercer is nowhere to be found. Several
smaller round tables encircle the larger table.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Come, there is an open table yet.

                         WILLIAM (to Mary)
               Do you see Lady Mercer anywhere?

                         MARY (to William)
               Would you be seen in public if you
               had behaved as she just did?

The foursome work their way to an open table. Mary begins to
take a chair with its back to the center of the room, but
Ruthven grabs her arm.

                         RUTHVEN
               Please. The visage of one so fair
               should not be denied this good
               company. Allow me.

Ruthven pulls a chair out for Mary, one that provides its
occupant with a better view of the other guests (or vice
versa), and sits in the chair in which she had originally
planned to sit. Christian sits down next to Ruthven and
William takes the remaining seat.

A light meal has already been placed at each setting, but no
one starts to eat. A carafe of red wine is in the center of
the table; everyone's glasses are empty.

                         CHRISTIAN
               So I was saying -

Christian takes the carafe and fills everyone's glasses.

                         CHRISTIAN (Cont.)
               Ruthven and I met in that casino in
               town. The one where -

                         RUTHVEN
               Really, Christian, must you relate
               this tale again?

                         WILLIAM
               No, I'd like to hear it.

                         RUTHVEN
               Oh, very well then. Continue.

                         CHRISTIAN
                    (laughing)
               Oh, as if you could stop me if you
               tried! Anyway, this is really a
               most intriguing story. So I was at
               that casino, playing baccarat. And
               you know baccarat is simply not my
               game. I may be an expert at whist -

                         WILLIAM
               I'm always smart enough to have you
               on my team, am I not?

                         CHRISTIAN
               Right. So I'm actually winning for 
               once, surprising as that may sound.
               The poor fellow next to me,
               however, was not having quite as
               much luck....

                                                     FADE TO:

INT. CASINO - EVENING

Flashback. Posh, crowded, overdecorated atmosphere. Christian
and three other PLAYERS are seated at a baccarat table. The
two players to Christian's left are extravagantly dressed and
dripping with jewelry; Player 1, to his right, is dressed
plainly and looks a bit unkempt (more like he has lost sleep
than he can't afford to look better). Christian provides the
perfect balance.

                         CHRISTIAN V.O.
               It was only a few weeks ago; I had
               just gotten into town and felt like
               getting out for a night.

The DEALER makes casual CONVERSATION with the bejeweled
players as he tosses out cards. Player 1 talks to his hands.

                         PLAYER 1
               Last round for me. Out after this
               is what I am.

Christian feels obligated to answer.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Bad luck tonight, sir?

No reply.

                         CHRISTIAN (Cont.)
               I say, not winning much tonight?

                         PLAYER 1
               Winning, you bloody fool? Down to
               my last pence, I am.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Hard luck, hard luck. Look, if you
               need to borrow -

                         PLAYER
               Borrow? Sir, you mistake me for the
               indigent man. I can assure you, I
               have wealth enough at home. Only
               trying to recoup my losses for
               tonight, I am.

Ruthven walks over from another area of the casino and stands
behind the two bejeweled players. The dealer finishes passing
out cards.

                         CHRISTIAN V.O.
               I certainly didn't mean to insult
               the man, of course. There was no
               need for his haughtiness.
                    (pause)
               Anyway, Vincent walks over then,
               and has the nerve to stop
               the hand just as we're placing our
               bets.

The players begin to move chips around on the table. Ruthven
leans forward between the two bejeweled players and raises a
hand.

                         RUTHVEN
               Excuse me. Dealer? Would it be
               possible to join the game for this
               hand?

                         DEALER
               I'm sorry, sir. Once the cards have
               hit the table, that's not allowed.

                         RUTHVEN
               Oh, but surely these fine gentlemen
               won't mind if you deal this hand
               again.

Ruthven clasps a hand on the shoulder of one of the bejeweled
players. A LIGHT briefly glows behind Ruthven's normally dull
eyes, as if they were the eyes of a cat. The light dies as
quickly as it appears.

There is a long, uncomfortable pause.

                         BEJEWELED PLAYER
               Oh, we may as well let the man in.
               Yes, let's deal this hand again and
               allow him to play.

No one else reacts, but the bejeweled player places his cards
in front of the dealer, face up, then reaches for Christian's
cards and does the same. Ruthven grins.

                         RUTHVEN
               Misdeal.

INT. DINING ROOM - NIGHT

Ruthven stares blankly at Christian.

                         RUTHVEN
               I did not say that.

Christian looks highly amused at his own story, William seems
to be hanging on his every word, and Mary just looks
embarrassed.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Oh, the devil you didn't! It didn't
               matter anyway, that was probably my
               worst hand of the night.

                         WILLIAM
               So did they deal you in?

                         RUTHVEN
               Of course.

                         MARY
               It doesn't seem like you gave them
               much of a choice.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Anyway, no matter. He sat there for
               a few more hands. That one poor
               fellow won a few, so he stayed in
               the game for a while. But his luck
               started to turn in a frightening
               way.

INT. CASINO - EVENING

A hand is in progress. Player 1 is obviously trying to hold
back a smile; Ruthven has a poker face any card shark would
envy.

Christian lifts a corner of his cards to peek at them, then
throws a chip in front of him.

                         CHRISTIAN V.O.
               The take had grown quite large on
               this one hand. My cards were fair
               at best, but I figured I'd stay in
               a while longer.

Player 1 doesn't even look at his cards. He takes a small
stack of chips and slides them into the growing pot.

                         PLAYER 1
               To you, Lord Ruthven!

Ruthven matches Player 1's bet.

                         RUTHVEN
               I call, sir.

                         CHRISTIAN V.O.
               I had thought the man would have
               left the game on the last hand,
               which he broke even on, but he just
               wanted Vincent's money, I suppose.

Player 1, his face BEAMING like the cat that swallowed the
canary, turns his cards over - a five and a three. Christian,
an obvious loser, tosses his cards in face-down.

Ruthven does not move.

                         PLAYER 1
               Then I've won? Yes! The last hand
               equaled my losses; this will
               certainly turn tonight into a big
               winning!

He reaches for the chips.

                         RUTHVEN
               Sir, I have not yet shown my cards.

                         PLAYER 1
               Yes, but surely -

Ruthven reveals his cards - the three remaining threes. Player
1 picks up his cards and THROWS them at the dealer in
frustration.

                         PLAYER 1
               Bah! My luck was turning! Never
               should've let you in the game.

                         RUTHVEN
               If you recall, sir, your luck
               turned after I joined.

                         BEJEWELED PLAYER
               'Tis true, 'tis true.

                         PLAYER 1
               Dealer, kindly extend some credit
               to me that I might continue ... in
               the amount of -

                         DEALER
               I'm sorry, sir, but we extend
               credit only to a few of our most -

                         PLAYER 1
               What, most rich? Master Dealer, I
               am more than capable of covering
               any debt you may advance, I can
               assure you.

                         DEALER
               That may be so, but our policy -

                         PLAYER 1
               To Hell and Damnation with your
               policy! Extend the credit, or I
               shall be forced to speak with the
               proprietor of this establishment!

Ruthven holds up a hand in front of the dealer before he has a
chance to retort.

                         RUTHVEN (to Player 1)
               Now then. I don't think that will
               be necessary, my friend.

Ruthven and the dealer begin a CONVERSATION, with occasional
PROTESTATIONS by Player 1, but it is the voices of Christian
and the others that we hear:

                         CHRISTIAN V.O.
               I thought Ruthven was about to
               reach into his coat pocket and hand
               the man a roll of 100-pound notes!

                         MARY V.O.
               So what did he do?

                         CHRISTIAN V.O.
               Nothing short of convince the
               dealer to extend credit from the
               casino.

                         WILLIAM V.O.
               But I thought they would never do
               that without an established,
               prepaid account.

                         CHRISTIAN V.O.
               As did I. It's all in the
               persuasive art, I tell you, and
               this man is a master. A lord.

                         RUTHVEN V.O.
               Oh, you give me far too much
               credit.

                         MARY V.O.
               I should say.

The loan to Player 1 is transacted, Player 1 signs a paper,
and the dealer begins to pass out cards. Player 1's hands
tremble when he picks up his cards.

INT. DINING ROOM - NIGHT

Servants clear the dinner plates from the tables; some guests
start to leave. The quantity of food on Ruthven's plate
remains the same, though its contents have been moved around.

                         WILLIAM
               Phenomenal bit of charity.

                         CHRISTIAN
               That's not the end of it.

                         WILLIAM
               Oh?

                         CHRISTIAN
               Not quite. Turned out that the man
               had wagered his lands to cover that
               loan. He won a hand or two, but his
               bad-luck streak returned and he
               lost the entire loan by the time he
               was through.

                         MARY
               The casino allowed him a loan
               against his own home?

Ruthven responds matter-of-factly, as if the answer were
patently obvious.

                         RUTHVEN
               That's what I could arrange.

                         MARY
               Horrid. Simply horrid.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Maybe so, but at least the man was
               happy for a time. He was given the
               opportunity to live like a lord.

                         WILLIAM
               Quite intriguing.

A pause ensues during which William and Mary absorb
Christian's story. Ruthven stands.

                         RUTHVEN
               Sorry as I am not to offer an ...
               alternate representation of my
               character, I'm afraid I must
               proceed into the night.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Sounds like a fine idea for us all,
               in fact.

                         RUTHVEN
               Until next time, then, my friends.

Ruthven hastens away from the table.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Say, Ruthven, wait just one moment!

                         RUTHVEN
               Yes?

                         CHRISTIAN
               You've done quite a bit of
               traveling, have you not?

Ruthven turns and walks back to the table. William senses that
Christian is about to mention his ill-planned trip.

                         WILLIAM
               Christian, please....

                         CHRISTIAN
               Nonsense.

                         RUTHVEN
               Actually, I seem to travel more
               often than I stay in one place.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Well then, I'd say you're in a
               unique position to assist our
               friend William here. He's planning
               a trip of his own shortly.

                         RUTHVEN
               Oh?

                         WILLIAM
               Well ... yes, I am. A "coming-of
               -age" trip, you might say.

                         RUTHVEN
               Where do you plan to go?

                         MARY
               That's the problem, he can't
               decide!

                         CHRISTIAN
               You must understand, Ruthven, my
               friend William has never been the
               best at convincing himself of
               anything.

                         WILLIAM
               Thank you, but I believe I'm
               capable of speaking for myself.

Ruthven seems to be getting impatient.

                         RUTHVEN
               Very well, very well. I must take
               my leave for tonight, but send a
               man for me tomorrow evening,
               William. I shall be honored to
               assist you in planning your trip.
               Now ... good evening to you all.

He briskly EXITS.

                         CHRISTIAN
               There. Now was that so horrible?

                         WILLIAM
               Well no. At least not for me, at
               least not yet. We'll have to see
               how tomorrow goes.
                    (pause)
               Interesting as I found him and your
               story, I fear he isn't overly fond
               of me.

Christian LAUGHS.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Oh, William. You're putting too
               much thought into this - that's
               just his manner. He's more than
               happy to offer his assistance, I'm
               sure.

                         MARY
               Still, there is something odd about
               that man.

EXT. MERCER BUILDING - NIGHT

The weather has improved, developing into a clear night.
Ruthven comes outside and walks to a SERVANT who stands by the
door. He QUESTIONS the servant, but we hear:

                         CHRISTIAN V.O.
               How so?

                         MARY V.O.
               Oh, I don't know. He seems somehow
               falsely charming. As if he were
               trying too hard.

Ruthven begins to walk down the street.

INT. DINING ROOM - NIGHT

Mary, Christian, and William continue their conversation.
Servants clear the dining room.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Not everyone can be as genuinely
               charming as I, my dear.

Mary GIGGLES demurely.

                         WILLIAM
               He certainly charmed Lady Mercer
               into making a royal fool of
               herself, at any rate.

INSERT (EXT. LONDON - NIGHT): Lady Mercer makes her way down a
deserted London Street, dabbing at tears with a handkerchief.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Oh, I don't see how you could blame
               Ruthven for that.

                         WILLIAM
               Who's blaming? I only wish I had
               that sort of persuasive power over
               all the women I come into contact
               with!

Christian and William LAUGH at the idea. Mary just SMILES.

                         MARY
               Still, you'd think she'd have the
               decency to make an appearance for
               the meal after her own drawing
               room. I mean, does anyone even know
               where she disappeared to?

INSERT (EXT. LONDON - NIGHT): Lady Mercer rounds a corner into
a dark alleyway.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Not if she has anything to say of
               it, I have no doubt.

                         WILLIAM
               One would think she had returned by
               this time of night, anyway. Most
               likely she simply retired without
               having to make excuses to anyone.

                         MARY
               I haven't any doubt this will all
               be explained away tomorrow. But for
               now, my brother, I am tired. And
               sleep awaits.

The three walk out of the room, continuing with idle
CONVERSATION as they exit.

EXT. LONDON - NIGHT

Lady Mercer walks in an alley lit only by the moon. As she
approaches a well-lit main street, a SHADOWY FIGURE grabs her
from behind, back into the alley.

Lights from the main street glint off a dagger, as the shadowy
figure plunges it into Lady Mercer's neck. The silent night is
pierced by her SCREAM, though it is quickly muffled.

INT. AUBREY HOME (LIBRARY) - NIGHT

Ruthven and William sit in large, leather-backed chairs, which
are set at an angle on opposite sides of a small mahogany end
table. Several books are piled on the table, obviously removed
from the myriad of shelves in the room.

                         WILLIAM
               I really am sorry to have asked you
               here so late, Ruthven. I tried
               again to decide on my own where to
               travel, but -

                         RUTHVEN
               Really, do not even give it a
               second thought. I am happy to
               assist you, and I prefer the night,
               anyway.

                         WILLIAM
               Well. Good. I really am quite
               anxious to get your opinions on the
               trip. From the way Christian was
               talking, I got the impression that
               you were quite well traveled.

                         RUTHVEN
               I certainly have seen my share of
               the world, I suppose. But there are
               always places one desires to see
               again.

                         WILLIAM
               Right, right. Exactly. Which is why
               I wished to consult with you. Books
               can only say so much about
               someplace, whereas you can give me
               more of a first-hand account.

                         RUTHVEN
                    (overlapping)
               Ah, but I am only one man, with one
               opinion. And these books -

Ruthven lifts a book off the mahogany table and begins leafing
through it.

                         RUTHVEN (Cont.)
               - are but another.

                         WILLIAM
               I suppose what I want from you is
               to find out what makes one want to
               return to a place. What do we see
               that embeds good places in our
               minds and makes us want to return?

                         RUTHVEN
               'Tis not mere sight, my friend, that
               draws us to return, but more of a
               combination of the senses. The sight
               in conjunction with the smell, the
               sounds, the feel of a place ... the
               taste.
                    (pause)
               And it is not always a sense of good
               that brings us back time and time
               again. Both good and horrific
               experiences play equally on the mind;
               one type of experience holds just as
               dear a place as the other, whether we
               wish it to or not. Strong memories
               can be both sweet and sad. It is the
               strength of the final effect that such
               a memory has on our mind - and not its
               type - that brings the memory to the
               fore and makes us long to relive it.
                    (pause)
               Or some memories, we cannot help but
               relive ... though we may constantly
               try to forget them, striving to
               release the tormenting grasp that they
               maintain on us, to force them out of
               our heads, the thoughts continue to
               come to the fore of our minds, of our
               dreams, occasionally peeping through
               and troubling our waking thoughts.
               Think back to the first memory of your
               youth, my friend. For most people, it
               is some traumatic moment, a moment
               that they would prefer not to remember
               yet it still lingers in their thoughts.

A pause ensues, during which William seems to be deep in
thought, entranced by Ruthven's speech. Finally, he regains
the power of speech.

                         WILLIAM
               What of your first memory?

                         RUTHVEN
               I remember very little of my youth.

Ruthven shifts uncomfortably in his chair. He closes the book
he was holding and places it back on the table.

                         WILLIAM
               Very little, sure, but your first
               memory, what was it of? Was it a
               traumatic one?

                         RUTHVEN
               I just told you, I remember almost
               nothing.

Ruthven begins to grow agitated.

                         WILLIAM
               Your first memory, though,
               Ruthven. I mean, surely you have a
               first memory.

An uncomfortable pause, then nothing. A LIGHT appears behind
Ruthven's eyes, then quickly fades away. William speaks
hesitantly.

                         WILLIAM (Cont.)
               I apologize, Lord Ruthven. It is
               obviously not something you wish to
               speak of.

                         RUTHVEN
               Ah, no, it is I who should
               apologize to you. I suppose I am
               the one who started talking about
               first memories to begin with.

                         WILLIAM
               But it was me who would not let the
               subject go.

                         RUTHVEN
               Enough, I will hear no more. Your
               trip, William, is what I am here to
               discuss.

                         WILLIAM
               Yes, well.
                    (pause)
               I believe I have a general plan in
               mind, and I would very much
               appreciate your opinions on it.

Ruthven nods.

                         WILLIAM (Cont.)
               I was considering beginning in
               France, Paris most likely. I have
               heard such wonderful -

                         RUTHVEN
               Excuse me, William.

                         WILLIAM
               Yes?

                         RUTHVEN
               Are you a child?

                         WILLIAM
               What?

                         RUTHVEN
               A child, William. Do you consider
               yourself to still be a child? Or do
               you wish to take this trip as an
               adult?

                         WILLIAM
               Well, an adult, of course. What
               exactly are you getting at?

                         RUTHVEN
               Paris is a place for children, my
               friend. Drunkards and bad poets.
               Nothing more than children playing
               the roles of adults: le théatre des
               bouffons. It is not a place to
               which I would ever return.

William throws up his hands in disgust.

                         WILLIAM
               It took me three months to
               determine this much, and you
               dismiss it so quickly. At this rate
               I'll be lucky to leave London
               before my death.

                         RUTHVEN
               Relax, my friend. I can just as
               quickly plan an entire trip for us.

                         WILLIAM
               Us?

                         RUTHVEN
               Well, I have been meaning to begin
               traveling again for a few days. As
               I have said, I do not usually
               remain in one place for very long.

                         WILLIAM
               I am more than flattered, Lord
               Ruthven. It would be an honor to
               have you accompany me.

                         RUTHVEN
               Yes, yes. On with the task at hand.

                         WILLIAM
               Right.

                         RUTHVEN
               Interests, my friend. What is it
               that interests you?

William pauses and looks around at the books in the room as if
they might give him the answer.

                         WILLIAM
               Well ... in my studies at
               university, I did a lot of research
               on architecture - ruins and such,
               you know. I found that quite
               interesting.

                         RUTHVEN
               Splendid! Problem solved. We leave
               two days from now.

Ruthven stands and walks to the door.

                         WILLIAM
               What? But where? Wait a moment!

                         RUTHVEN
               Italy, and perhaps on to Greece.
               There you will find all you desire
               and memories to relive for
               centuries!

                         WILLIAM
               Amazing ... you certainly do know
               what you want. And, it would seem,
               what I want.

                         RUTHVEN
               Indeed ... indeed. I can find my
               own way out.

He exits.

INT. AUBREY HOME - AFTERNOON

Sunlight streams through an open window of a bedroom in the
house. Two trunks sit in a corner of the room: One is closed,
and the other is half packed. Mary follows William around the
room as he adds items to the second trunk.

                         MARY
               So where exactly are you going,
               anyway? You still haven't told me.

                         WILLIAM
               That's because I hardly know
               myself. We start in Rome; I know
               that much. From there, I believe
               it's somewhere in Greece.... Beyond
               that, Mary, I really don't know.

                         MARY
               Didn't you have any say at all in
               planning your own trip?

                         WILLIAM
               It's not really my own trip anymore
               now, is it? I mean, it's mine and
               Ruthven's together.

Two SERVANTS come by to carry the first trunk away. Mary
patiently waits for them to exit.

                         MARY
               Don't you think he seems to be in
               an awful hurry to leave?

                         WILLIAM
               What is that supposed to mean?

                         MARY
               Oh, nothing. Never mind.

William stops, with a few items in his hands, and turns to
face Mary.

                         WILLIAM
               Stop this nonsense, Mary, and tell
               me what's wrong. Since I told you
               I'd be taking this trip with
               Ruthven, you've been refusing to
               discuss the gentleman at all.

                         MARY
               I find Lord Vincent Ruthven to be
               far less than a gentleman, brother.

                         WILLIAM
               Mary!

                         MARY
               Well I'm sorry, but I do! I can't
               explain how or why, but I just know
               that there is something he's trying
               to hide. Something in his past,
               something in his present.
                    (pause)
               I don't know, maybe something in
               his future.

William returns to packing. He crams a few last items into the
trunk, then SLAMS it closed.

                         WILLIAM
               Now you're just talking nonsense.

                         MARY
               Am I?

No response.

                         MARY (Cont.)
               Fine, William. Maybe I am.

                    (pause)
               Just promise me you'll be careful.

                         WILLIAM
               Of course. Though I don't see how
               it's a younger sister's place to
               tell this to an older brother.

The servants reenter and carry the final trunk away. William
turns to lock his sister's gaze.

                         WILLIAM
               Now, about this matter with you and
               Christian.

                         MARY
               Brother -

                         WILLIAM
               Stop and let me speak a moment. You
               know there is nothing I'd rather
               see than the two of you together,
               but ... Mary ... I'm not asking you
               to wait long.

                         MARY
               You know I've never been one to
               follow convention, William.

                         WILLIAM
               Yes, I know. But I also know that
               you know I only have your
               best interests at heart. Mary, it's
               just not proper, and for
               once, I'd like you to do something
               the proper way.

                         MARY
               Fine.
                    (pause)
               It's a long ride, brother; you're
               going to miss the ship.

William slings a small bag over his shoulder and starts
walking out of the room.

                         MARY (Cont.)
               You will remember to write me,
               won't you?

                         WILLIAM
               Of course, Dearheart.

Mary runs over and HUGS William.

                         MARY
               A safe and fruitful voyage,
               brother.

                         WILLIAM
               I know of no other kind.

                         MARY
               And be sure to write!

He exits.

                         WILLIAM (O.S.)
               Yes, yes.

Mary walks to the window.

P.O.V. Mary:

William exits the house and meets a waiting carriage. Servants
lift the trunk into the back. William walks to the DRIVER and
SPEAKS to him, but it is too far for Mary to hear.

EXT. AUBREY HOME - AFTERNOON

William and the carriage driver conclude their conversation,
and William climbs into the carriage. From the window of the
home, we see Mary wave good-bye. Over this scene, we hear
William's voice reading his first letter to Mary:

                         WILLIAM V.O.
               "Dear Mary ... It has been only a
               week since my arrival in Rome, but
               I fear your hasty judgment of Lord
               Ruthven may have been more accurate
               than I had imagined. His conduct,
               it seems, has been far less than
               exemplary, particularly for a man
               of his standing in society."

P.O.V. Mary:

The driver CRACKS a whip, and the carriage drives away.

INT. AUBREY HOME - AFTERNOON

Mary slowly turns from the window. She walks around the room
and examines its emptiness.

                         WILLIAM V.O. (Cont.)
               "It seems strangeness follows the
               man wherever he goes. He did not
               even appear on our ship until the
               night after it had set sail!
               I still have no idea how or when he
               got on board, and he was entirely
               unwilling to share such
               information, so I cannot relate any
               more of that story as I have not
               been made privy to any more of it."

                                                      FADE TO:

INT. AUBREY HOME - WEEKS LATER - NIGHT

Mary stands, reading from William's letter, which she holds in
her hands. Christian reads over her shoulder.

                         WILLIAM V.O. (Cont.)
               "I can, however, relate what has
               happened since we arrived in Rome.
               After Ruthven's numerous encounters
               with females en route (I think he's
               left a ruined woman at every stop
               we have made!), I finally feel
               forced to confront him here, as I
               know we plan to stay at least a
               month. It seems he has gained the
               favor of another young innocent
               whose reputation I am now certain
               he intends to tarnish. This time,
               however, the girl is the daughter
               of the very family who has been
               kind enough to take us in."

INT. BERCOVICCI HOME (WILLIAM'S ROOM) - DUSK

TITLE CARD: "Rome, March 1819"

William sits at a writing desk in the home of the Bercoviccis,
the family with whom he and Ruthven are staying. A single
candle lights the sparsely-furnished room.

                         WILLIAM V.O. (Cont.)
               "I will of course attempt to put an
               end to his scheming, assuming I can
               even track the man down. He has
               become rather difficult to even
               locate since we arrived in Rome."

William replenishes the ink in his pen, then returns to his
letter.

                         WILLIAM V.O. (Cont.)
               I will be sure to write again when
               the issue is resolved. Please take
               care to behave, Dearheart. As
               always, William."

He finishes the letter, folds it in thirds, and seals it with
a few drops of wax from the candle. As a final touch, he marks
the wax with a signet ring.

Ruthven walks past the open door to the room just as William
looks up from sealing his letter.

                         WILLIAM
               Ruthven!

                         RUTHVEN (O.S.)
               What?

                         WILLIAM
               Please, Vincent. A moment of your
               time.

                         RUTHVEN (O.S.)
               Can't this wait until later? I have
               an encounter at which I am
               expected, William.

                         WILLIAM
               With Anna Bercovicci, no doubt?
               Must you choose to pursue and ...
               demean the daughter of our hosts?

A moment passes, then Ruthven reappears in the doorway. The
amount of grey in his hair has increased, and he looks pale
and haggard. Only his eyes seem more animated than previously,
afire with a red glow.

                         RUTHVEN
               So now you feel the need to meddle
               in my personal affairs? Of all the
               impudence! Demean...! Was it not I
               who...?
                    (pause)
               You would never have even taken
               this trip if not for me! 

                         WILLIAM
               I only meant to -

                         RUTHVEN
               To what? Harass me? Am I not
               entitled to a moment's peace?

                         WILLIAM
               Peace? What is "peace" to you,
               Ruthven? Playing with the lives of
               the affluent until they end up
               festering in a dungeon when you
               abandon them? Or worse, cast out
               from the society in which they once
               held the highest stature?

                         RUTHVEN
               What?!

William stands from behind the writing desk.

                         WILLIAM
               Oh, you can't tell me you have no
               idea what I'm talking about! In
               every stop we've made en route to
               Rome, the noble are turned ignoble
               at your hand.

                         RUTHVEN
               My dear William, that is nothing
               short of an ignoratio elenchi.

                         WILLIAM
               Pardon? A what?

                         RUTHVEN
               Indeed ... Latin scholarship is not
               what it once was.
                    (pause)
               An ignoratio elenchi. A simple
               error in logic. Because the
               virtuous become infamous, does that
               mean it must be due to my actions?

                         WILLIAM
               Well, no, but you still must
               admit.... That is, I mean to say,
               why must it always be those with
               whom you have had the most intimate
               contact?

                         RUTHVEN
               Coincidence.

William SLAPS his hand against the writing desk in frustration
and turns his back to Ruthven.

                         WILLIAM
               You can't reasonably expect me to
               believe that this has all been mere
               coincidence?

                         RUTHVEN
               Yes, I can.

A LIGHT glows behind Ruthven's eyes as William turns back
around to face him.

                         RUTHVEN (Cont.)
               And can you honestly say that such
               occurrences were not
               coincidental?

William straightens the items remaining on the writing desk,
takes his letter to Mary in hand, and walks toward the door of
the room.

                         WILLIAM
               I suppose perhaps I cannot.

                    (pause)
               But this does not change things. Do
               you deny that you intend to see
               Anna this evening?

                         RUTHVEN
               I do not.

                         WILLIAM
               Very well. Then I leave your
               company immediately. This evening.
               For I am certain of two things:
               that your intentions with Anna are
               less than honorable and that our
               host will take such intentions
               harshly.

                         RUTHVEN
               You may do as you choose, my
               friend. Though I still say I do not
               aim to sully the virtue of Anna or
               of any other. But "honor," William
               ... "honor" is an outdated concept.

                         WILLIAM
               Maybe to you.

William exits. Ruthven takes one step into the room and looks
in the direction of the candle. The candle, seemingly
assaulted by a breeze from Ruthven's direction, is
extinguished.

INT. DRAWING ROOM - NIGHT

TITLE CARD: "London, May 1819"

GUESTS interact in a reception room more lush than Lady
Mercer's. The room is aglow with candlelight from a huge
chandelier and several candelabra that sit on tables
throughout the room. 

Christian and Mary sit at one of these tables and stare at
each other for a few moments without speaking.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Do you suppose we should write your
               brother and tell him?

                         MARY
               Tell him what?

                         CHRISTIAN
               About us, Mary.

Christian picks up a glass of white wine from the table and
drinks from it.

                         MARY
               Oh come now, Christian. Really,
               what is there to tell?

                         CHRISTIAN
               Mary....

                         MARY
               What?

No reply. Christian puts his glass back on the table.

                         MARY (Cont.)
               If there is one thing that my
               brother has taught me it's the
               virtue of patience. I have no
               intention of abruptly announcing a
               betrothal to you when other suitors
               have not even had the chance to -

                         CHRISTIAN
               I am not suggesting a public
               announcement, Mary. Besides, you
               have only heard my offer. You
               haven't exactly promised to accept
               it.

                         MARY
               You know I can't do that,
               Christian.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Of course I do. I understand and
               appreciate etiquette as well as any
               educated man, which is why I don't
               get upset by your utter lack of
               response to my proposal. But did
               you not say that you are concerned
               for William's safety?

                         MARY
               Yes.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Well, don't you think this might
               entice him to cut his trip a bit
               short? Besides, he's not a fool; he
               knows I've been pursuing you for
               years.

He reaches out and takes Mary's hands in his own.

                         CHRISTIAN (Cont.)
               I love you, Mary. The sun rises
               when you smile and sets when you
               leave me. And damn the "other
               suitors," anyway. I intend to win
               your heart and your hand ... I
               always have.

Mary BLUSHES and tries to hide a smile, but she pulls her
hands away.

                         MARY
               It's just not proper, Christian.
                    (pause)
               You know I feel for you, but ... I
               simply cannot promise anything
               right now. And how can I lie to my
               brother and tell him I have
               promised what I have not?

A SERVANT comes by and stops at the table. Some of the guests
begin to exit the drawing room.

                         SERVANT
               Pardon me gentleman, miss ... but
               Lord Manning has requested that the
               guests join him in the dining room
               for a brief repast.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Yes, of course.

The servant walks away. Christian stands.

                         CHRISTIAN (to Mary)
               Shall we go?

Mary does not respond. She stares absentmindedly at the ground
as the servant walks away.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Mary?

                         MARY
               Has Lady Mercer been found yet?

Mary looks up. Christian takes a deep breath.

                         CHRISTIAN
               No.
                    (pause)
               She hasn't been seen since her last
               drawing-room, with Lord Ruthven.
               But no one has seen much of Lord
               Mercer lately either.
                    (pause)
               She's just embarrassed, Mary, I'm
               sure it's nothing more. She
               arranges a drawing-room twice a
               year, and I'm sure she'll reappear
               by the summer. I mean, Lord Ruthven
               isn't even here.

                         MARY
               Nothing ever seems to happen when
               he's here; it's only when he leaves
               that disaster is revealed.

                         CHRISTIAN
               William can take care of himself,
               Mary. I'm sure he's fine.

Mary stands.

                         MARY
               I know in my heart that you're
               right. I know he's fine and I'm
               sure he will be fine. But it's just
               that....

                         CHRISTIAN
               What is it?

                         MARY
               Write the letter.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Are you sure that's what you want?

                         MARY
               Write him; tell him we're madly in
               love and intend to wed tomorrow if
               you must. Just bring him home
               before this Lord Vincent Ruthven
               destroys him. Just know that what
               you write is not what I feel.

Christian smiles, walks to Mary, and pulls her into an
embrace. Mary willingly succumbs.

                         CHRISTIAN
               I know very well what you feel.

INT. AUBREY HOME (FOYER) - THE NEXT DAY

Sunlight streams in from large windows at the front of the
home. Mary paces back and forth, wax-sealed papers in her
hand.

There is a booming KNOCK at the door. Mary rushes and flings
the door open, revealing Christian on the other side.

                         CHRISTIAN
               I came as soon as I got the news.
               When did the letter arrive?

                         MARY
               Two letters. They arrived only just
               last night, while we were at Lord
               Manning's.

                         CHRISTIAN
               So all is all right?

                         MARY
               I haven't even broken the seal yet.

                         CHRISTIAN
               So what are you waiting for?

Mary smiles.

                         MARY
               You.
                    (pause)
               Come, let's read them out in the
               garden; it is such a beautiful day!

EXT. GARDEN - DAY

Mary and Christian walk along a path in a resplendent garden,
filled with purple and white flowers, beautiful trees and
bushes, statues, stone benches, and in the center, a large
gurgling fountain.

The seal has been broken on one of the letters, which Mary now
holds in her hands, reading aloud. Christian holds the still
-sealed second letter.

                         MARY
               "... and so I left him the
               following morning. Anna Bercovicci
               had gone missing the night before
               (I of course assume she met with
               Ruthven as they had secretly
               planned), and the whereabouts of
               Ruthven himself were also unknown.
               I fear the worst."
                    (pause)
               "I fear the worst"? what do you
               suppose he means by that?

                         CHRISTIAN
               He doesn't say?

                         MARY
               No, that's the end of that letter.
               Except for his usual admonitions
               for me to behave and so forth.

They reach the center of the garden and sit next to each other
on a bench facing the fountain. Christian then hands the
second letter to Mary, who breaks its seal.

                         MARY
               Well, I suppose he's fine, anyway,
               since this letter is dated after
               the first.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Does he say where he is now?

Mary begins to scan the letter:

                         MARY
               "Dear Mary" ... "hope all is going
               well" ... "have neither seen nor
               heard from Ruthven since my arrival
               in Athens."

                         CHRISTIAN
               Athens!

EXT. ATHENS - DAY

TITLE CARD: "Athens, May 1819"

Establishing shots of Athens, mainly architectural ruins (such
as the Parthenon), architectural achievements (intact
temples), and archeological sites.

                         WILLIAM V.O.
               "Athens was to be the next major
               stop on the trip Lord Ruthven had
               designed, and I must say, it is the
               perfect choice. The
               architectural ruins alone make this
               the most spectacular place I have
               ever known! I sit and sketch for
               hours upon hours; the work that the
               ancient Greeks put into their
               architecture is phenomenal. Plus I
               take frequent trips into the woods
               ... oh, you would love it here,
               Dearheart! But there is more, Mary.
               As you predicted, I have met
               someone."

EXT. ATHENS (OVERLOOKING RUINS) - DAY

At the top of a tall, grassy hill that overlooks some minor
architectural ruins, William sits and draws in a large
sketchbook. Running in dizzying circles in the fields around
him is IANTHE, a naturally beautiful, young, Greek woman.

Ianthe wears a long, loose-fitting dress that flows in the
breeze behind her as she runs. Her dark, long hair is tied
back into a loose braid that bounces with each step.

                         WILLIAM V.O. (Cont.)
               "Her name is Ianthe, the daughter
               of the family I'm staying with. She
               is the most beautiful, delicate,
               and innocent creature I have ever
               laid my eyes upon. Michelangelo
               created this kind of beauty; I
               never thought it could exist in
               front of me in a living being such
               as this. This is a beauty
               unencumbered by drawing-rooms,
               parties, and other affectations of
               society. Ianthe is truly natural,
               unlike anyone I have ever seen. I
               am in love at last."

Ianthe finally tires of her circuitous route. She runs to
William, drops down beside him, and falls into a fit of
GIGGLES. William attempts to hide a smile.

                         WILLIAM
               Silly.

Ianthe sits up next to William and leans in to see what he is
doing in the sketchbook, but William pulls back. She speaks
with a Greek accent:

                         IANTHE
               What are you doing?

                         WILLIAM
               Drawing.

                         IANTHE
                    (mocking William's accent)
               "Drawing." You're always "drawing,"
               William. Do you not have any
               interests besides "drawing"?

                         WILLIAM
               I have you.

                         IANTHE
               Oh, you think you do?

Ianthe resumes her GIGGLING fit and William can't help but
join in.

                         WILLIAM
               You are the silliest person on this
               earth, Ianthe. And I love every bit
               of you. You know if it were not for
               my fascination with these ruins -

                         IANTHE
               And with your walks in the woods.

                         WILLIAM
               And with my walks in the woods. If
               not for those two things, I would
               spend every waking moment in your
               company.

                         IANTHE
               Ha! And you call me silly!

William stares at Ianthe for a moment, then tosses his
sketchbook aside. He leans over to tackle Ianthe and after a
bit of wrestling, has her pinned to the ground. The two are
LAUGHING hysterically.

                         WILLIAM
               Yes, I call you silly. And
               what do you intend to do
               about it?

                         IANTHE
               Maybe I intend to do ...
               this!

With that, Ianthe flips William onto his back, pins his arms
to the ground over his head, and sits on his stomach. William
lets out a weak little OOF.

                         WILLIAM
               Fine, fine, I give up. I'm yours
               for the rest of the day, Ianthe.

                         IANTHE
               That is all I ask.

Ianthe leans in and gives William a little KISS on the nose.
She's about to get back up when William PULLS her down to him,
and soon enough, the two are passionately KISSING and rolling
around in the grass.

EXT. ATHENS (RUINS) - DAY

A lone figure watches from the ruins below.

EXT. ATHENS (OVERLOOKING RUINS) - AFTERNOON

William and Ianthe lie on their backs, gazing at the sky. A
FULL MOON has just become visible, low in the sky just behind
the ruins. Clouds threaten from the west.

                         IANTHE
               Full moon tonight.

                         WILLIAM
               Yes. Should be a beautiful night,
               if that storm holds back.
                    (pause)
               I'm thinking a ride through that
               wooded area just outside of town is
               in store for me later this
               afternoon.

Ianthe turns on her side to face William, a look of concern in
her face.

                         IANTHE
               Oh, William ... you mustn't. Not
               tonight. No.

                         WILLIAM
               Why ever not?

Ianthe looks back to the sky as if the answer might lie there.

                         IANTHE
               The ... the storm, of course.

                         WILLIAM
               Now you're just being overly
               worrisome. Even if the storm does
               come, it won't be any bother for
               me.
                    (pause)
               I'm reasonably sure I won't melt in
               the rain, after all.

                         IANTHE
               Don't be that way, William; I'm
               serious.

                         WILLIAM
               Serious about what? You
               can't expect me to heed any
               warnings if you're not going to
               elaborate.

Ianthe stands and turns her back on William.

                         IANTHE
               Fine. If your opinion of me is not
               high enough to take me at my
               word.... Besides, if I told you,
               you'd only call me "silly" again.

She starts to walk away. William darts up after her and puts
an arm on her shoulder. They begin to walk together back
toward Ianthe's village.

                         WILLIAM
               You know how much I value your
               company and your opinion, Ianthe.
               You know I love you and would do
               nothing to harm you. But this isn't
               you; it's me. And you've given me
               no viable reason for your concern.

                         IANTHE
               My concern in itself is not enough?

                         WILLIAM
               I'm afraid not.
                    (pause)
               And besides, it's obvious that you
               have your reasons. You should never
               hesitate to share anything with me,
               no matter how silly -

Ianthe throws William's hand off her shoulder and stops
walking.

                         IANTHE
               There's that word again!

                         WILLIAM
               Oh, you know that's not what I
               meant!

                         IANTHE
               Do I? All I know is that you're not
               willing to take me seriously!

                         WILLIAM
               You're not giving me a chance!

Ianthe is now on the verge of tears. She turns away from
William.

                         WILLIAM (Cont.)
               Ianthe ... Ianthe, I'm sorry. I-I
               didn't mean to yell.

He walks over to comfort her. She speaks between sobs.

                         IANTHE
               I know, William ... I know.
                    (pause)
               It's just that ... it's ... I don't
               know whether to believe in it
               myself....

                         WILLIAM
               Believe in what? Please, tell me.

                         IANTHE
               The stories of that wood, William.
               When I was a child, my nurse would
               tell me horrible stories of that
               place. No Greek would ever remain
               in that wood at night, not under
               any circumstances. In that wood ...
               at night ... on the night of the
               full moon....

William's interest reaches its peak.

                         WILLIAM
               What? What would happen on the
               night of the full moon?

                         IANTHE
               The ... vampyre.

No reaction.

                         IANTHE (Cont.)
               By light of day, this creature would
			   pass unnoticed amongst friends and
			   society - so my nurse would speak.
			   Oh, the stories of horror she would
			   tell, William.
                    (pause)
               At night, on the night of a full
               moon, the fiend would be forced to
               drain the blood from a victim to
               prolong his ... his "existence" for
               another year. The victims would
               often be horribly ... mutilated ...
               cut up by whatever weapon was at
               hand. Oh, I can never forget those
               horrible, horrible stories she
               would tell.

Still no reaction from William. Ianthe begins to regain her
composure and end her sobbing.

                         IANTHE (Cont.)
               You don't believe me.

                         WILLIAM
               I didn't say that.

They begin walking back to Ianthe's village.

                         IANTHE
               Maybe not. But I can tell by your
               reaction.
                    (pause)
               Then you won't cancel your ride
               tonight?

                         WILLIAM
               No.

                         IANTHE
               If you won't believe me, then talk
               to Mr. Paulus, my neighbor. He lost
               a niece. Mutilated three years ago
               and completely drained of blood.
                    (pause)
               Or the blacksmith, Granaupoulis.
               His own wife, sixteen years ago
               almost to the day.

                         WILLIAM
               And you have spoken to these
               people?

                         IANTHE
               Of course not. If you had lived
               through such events, would you want
               to talk of them?

                         WILLIAM
               Ianthe, has it ever occurred to you
               that your nurse was trying to
               instill some fear in you? That she
               didn't want you wandering off
               without supervision? That she
               wanted to maintain some sort of ...
               I don't know ... control over you?

Ianthe does not respond.

                         WILLIAM (Cont.)
               I can't see canceling my ride based
               on your nurse's fictions.

                         IANTHE
               You may choose not to believe me,
               William, but it is said that those
               who question the existence of the
               vampyre always have proof thrust in
               their faces. I cannot stop you from
               doing what you wish ... but that
               does not mean I must agree with it.
                    (pause)
               There are times, my love, when you
               can be the most frustrating man I
               have ever met. But I, for one, can
               put my faith in you, for you are
               where my love lies.

                         WILLIAM
               My love lies with you, as well,
               Ianthe.

                         IANTHE
               But apparently not your trust. Just
               promise me one thing.

                         WILLIAM
               I promise you my heart. Is that not
               enough?

                         IANTHE
               William, just promise me you'll
               return before nightfall. It is the
               night that allows the full power of
               these creatures to come to light.

                         WILLIAM
               Oh, I still simply cannot see how
               you expect me to -

                         IANTHE
               Just promise me that. If your heart
               truly lies with me, surely you can
               grant me that one promise?

William SIGHS, tired of the argument.

                         WILLIAM
               Very well, Ianthe. Ere night falls
               upon the wood, I will return.

INT. AUBREY HOME (LIBRARY) - MORNING

Mary and Christian walk around the stacks of books. One of
them occasionally pulls a book off a shelf, searching for a
particular volume.

                         CHRISTIAN
               You sent the letter yesterday?

                         MARY
               Christian, I just told you I
               finished it but this morning - how
               could I have sent it yesterday? I
               swear, you are as nervous as if you
               had actually proposed marriage.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Are you saying that I didn't?

                         MARY
               Christian....

                         CHRISTIAN
               What, Mary? We both know that my
               proposal was genuine, despite what
               you may try to convince yourself in
               order to please your brother. And
               though I may love William like a
               brother, I still wish to know if
               the greater love that I have for
               his sister has any chance of
               becoming....

                         MARY
                    (overlapping)
               Enough! Christian, enough! I cannot
               tolerate any more discussion of
               this proposal.

                         CHRISTIAN
               But you cannot deny that you agreed
               to -

                         MARY
               I agreed to use this as a ruse to
               bring my brother home, and nothing
               more. And if you continue to insist
               that there was anything else in our
               understanding, then I'm afraid any
               potential future agreement may be
               in jeopardy.
                    (pause)
               Now, can we please set this
               discussion aside?

                         CHRISTIAN
               Yes, I suppose so. Though I still
               feel as if this is a step in -

                         MARY
               I keep trying to tell you, this is
               not a step at all. And if you
               continue to insist on thinking that
               way, I won't ever let the letter
               leave this house.

                         CHRISTIAN
               I understand.

                         MARY
               Do you? It certainly doesn't seem
               that you do. Much as I care for
               you, I shall not go against my
               brother's wishes.

                         CHRISTIAN
               What about your own wishes?

                         MARY
               What of them?

                         CHRISTIAN
               Do you intend to deny your feelings
               for me? Deny what we've shared?
               Deny what we could share in the
               future?

Christian moves to take Mary into an embrace, but Mary pushes
him away. She turns to hunt through the shelves of books.

                         MARY
               Could share, Christian.
               Could, not will; you just said it
               yourself. Do not continue to take
               me for granted, for you will find
               you have lost me.
                    (pause)
               Please, just help me find that book
               already.

Christian picks a book of a shelf and carries it to Mary.

                         CHRISTIAN
               The love I feel for you could never
               be taken for granted, Mary, not for
               a second.
                    (pause)
               Is this the book? Some of the pages
               have been marked.

With an inquisitive look on her face, Mary takes the book and
leafs through the first few pages.

                         MARY
               Where did you find that?

                         CHRISTIAN
               Here.

Christian leads her to the shelf from which he removed the
book. Mary replaces the book and pulls one from a bit further
down the shelf. She suppresses a smirk.

                         MARY
               Athens is in Greece, dear.

EXT. ATHENS (WOOD) - EVENING

A FULL MOON is ensconced in thick clouds. A strong wind HOWLS
through the trees. William, carrying a lantern in his hand,
stands and studies the foliage and the land around. Obviously
lost in his work, he occasionally scribbles on a few sheets of
paper that he carries. A sturdy-looking, coal-black horse
(SARDIS) is tied to a tree nearby.

A RUMBLE OF THUNDER sounds; Sardis rears up and WHINNIES in
response. William, his concentration broken, quickly walks
over to try and calm the horse.

                         WILLIAM
               Calm, Sardis ... calm. It's only
               the storm.

Another PEAL OF THUNDER, louder than the last, pierces the
air. This time it is William who is startled. He turns to look
at the sky just as a few RAINDROPS begin to fall.

The lantern is extinguished by a GUST of wind.

                         WILLIAM
               I believe now might be an ideal
               time to head back home.

William unties the horse and mounts with a quick, smooth
movement. The WIND picks up again, causing another LOUD HOWL
through the trees, accompanied by more THUNDER.

As William goads Sardis into motion, a TORRENT OF RAIN
suddenly lets loose. In moments, the horse is SLOSHING through
mud; William grips tightly to the slippery reins as Sardis
picks up speed.

An intensely bright FLASH OF LIGHTNING lights up the sky.
Another ROLL OF THUNDER follows almost immediately. William
goads Sardis on through the mud.

EXT. ATHENS (ANOTHER AREA OF THE WOOD) - EVENING

The RAIN continues pouring out of the sky. A BOLT OF LIGHTNING
flashes out of the sky and hits the base of a tree,
SPLINTERING it in half. THUNDER follows.

Half the stricken tree falls into the mud-soaked road leading
toward Ianthe's village. William and Sardis gallop into view
just as the tree hits the road. Sardis REARS back and
WHINNIES, then speeds off the road, deeper into the wood. It
takes all of William's effort to avoid being thrown off his
horse.

EXT. ATHENS (OUTSIDE IANTHE'S VILLAGE) - EVENING

The STORM continues to rage. Even this deep in the wood, the
rain is managing to work its way through the dense foliage. A
few buildings, grown over with vines and appearing almost like
part of the forest, are sparsely scattered in the area.

The MUFFLED SLOSH of hoofbeats on wet ground gradually grows
louder. Eventually, Sardis gallops into view; William appears
to be regaining control of the horse.

                         WILLIAM
               Hold, Sardis ... hold! Easy, girl.

Sardis finally comes to a stop about fifty yards from what
appears to be a small, abandoned house. A FLASH of lightning
illuminates this sight, and William notices it for the first
time as he dismounts from the horse.

                         WILLIAM
               What place is this? Are we near
               Ianthe's village, Sardis?

A loud SNORT is as close to an answer Sardis seems willing to
give. William LAUGHS.

                         WILLIAM
               I'm not sure if I should take that
               as a "yes" or a "no." Still ...
               maybe there's someone here who can
               tell us how to get back, hmm? Or at
               least there's shelter to keep me
               dry until this storm passes.

As William looks for a tree to tie Sardis to, THUNDER again
sounds - this time, however, it is accompanied by a woman's
SHRIEK. William looks up and toward the abandoned house,
unsure if he actually heard a scream or if the storm was
playing tricks on him.

He stands there, staring, unsure of whether to react. Just as
he starts to go back to his task of tying up Sardis, the
woman's SHRIEK again sounds, this time blending into a man's
MOCKING LAUGHTER.

William's head raises toward the house again, and this time he
drops the reins of the horse and runs to investigate. With the
force of pure adrenaline, he kicks in the door to the house as
another ROLL OF THUNDER resounds.

INT. ABandONED HOUSE - NIGHT

The inside of the house is totally black with darkness.
William stands cautiously in the doorway, at first silhouetted
by the dim moonlight, then suddenly lit up with a FLASH of
lightning.

                         WILLIAM
               Hello?

Another SCREAM sounds and William's head jerks to the right.
He enters the house and walks to his right, immediately
becoming enveloped by the darkness. The door SLAMS shut behind
him, leaving total blackness. The MOCKING LAUGHTER continues.

                         WILLIAM
               Is anyone there?

No response for a moment, then another SHRIEK. William's
FOOTSTEPS suddenly become loud and rapid; a FLASH of lightning
shows he is running toward the source of the noises - a WOMAN
lying on the ground with a MYSTERIOUS MAN standing over her.

                         WILLIAM
               Stop! Immediately, whoever you are,
               stop at once!

The woman's SHRIEKING has become weak and half-hearted, but
the mysterious man's LAUGHTER continues. Another FLASH of
lightning shows that the man holds some sort of blade in his
hand. The mysterious man's face cannot be seen, as his back is
to William, but the woman is Ianthe.

                         WILLIAM
               Ianthe!

William reaches the mysterious man, bumping into him in the
dark, and tries to seize hold of him from behind.

                         WILLIAM
               What have you done!? My beautiful
               Ianthe ... my love.... Stop!

                         MYSTERIOUS MAN
               Again, baffled!

As another BOLT OF LIGHTNING illuminates the scene, the
mysterious man picks William off the floor by his throat, HITS
him twice across the cheek, and HURLS him to the ground across
the room, like a rag doll. The mysterious man's LAUGHTER again
resounds.

William lets out a painful GASP as the mysterious man's knee
comes down with a THUD on his chest. The man raises his right
hand above William. A glint of light SHINES off an oddly
-shaped dagger poised above William's neck. The mysterious man
suddenly turns around, looking over his shoulder.

EXT. ABANDONED HOUSE - NIGHT

The source of light that shines off the dagger has come from a
group of PEASANTS carrying torches. They approach the
abandoned house. Nothing is visible through the window of the
house but the mysterious man's dagger and a LIGHT that glows
behind his eyes.

INT. ABANDONED HOUSE - NIGHT

The mysterious man lets out another LAUGH, then disappears out
the front door as fast as the wind itself. The oddly shaped
dagger CLINKS to the ground next to William. William can do
little but let out a feeble GROAN.

                         WILLIAM
               Ianthe....

The peasants reach the door and enter the house. The
torchlight fills the room and clearly illuminates the mud
-encrusted walls for the first time. One of the peasants
notices William, who continues to GROAN incoherently.

                         PEASANT 1
               Sir? Sir, can you hear me? Are you
               alright?
                    (to another peasant)
               Cerus, over here.

                         WILLIAM
               Ianthe.... Please, Ianthe....

Cerus comes over to Peasant 1, who is attempting to clean the
blood off William's face.

                         PEASANT 1
               I think he's calling for someone.
               Sounded like "Ianthe."

                         CERUS
               Yes, I hear.
                    (pause)
               Sir, please, where is she?

                         WILLIAM
               Ianthe ... Ianthe....

William feebly raises his head and looks to an obscured corner
of the room. Cerus and Peasant 1 turn to follow his gaze. They
signal for light to be brought to that corner.

As some of the peasants move their torches to the obscured
corner, their bodies block the view of William and the others.
A few of the peasants who went to investigate the corner GASP
in shock. After a moment of MURMURING, a consensus is reached,
and the peasants lift something from the corner, carry it
over, and lie it next to William.

William shuts his eyes to the sight - the lifeless form of
Ianthe - and starts to SOB. Ianthe's face is completely devoid
of color; even her lips are pale and ashen. Her neck and
breast are covered in blood, most of the damage probably done
by the mysterious man's dagger. 

On one side of her neck, however, are what appear to be teeth
marks. One of the peasants notices these marks and points at
them in a panic.

                         PEASANT 2
               A vampyre! A vampyre!

This cry starts a general PANIC amongst the other peasants.

                         PEASANT 1
               Cerus?

                         CERUS
               We must leave this place, at once.
                    (to William)
               Sir, are you able to walk?

                         WILLIAM
               Ianthe....

                         CERUS
               We'll have to carry him. Before
               that demon returns. Come on.

Cerus and Peasant 1 pick up William and carry him out the
front door of the abandoned house. Two other peasants carry
out Ianthe's body.

Grasped in William's hand is the oddly shaped dagger of the
mysterious man.

INT. IANTHE'S HOME (WILLIAM'S ROOM) - DAY

William lies in bed, with the curtains drawn. His eyes are
open, but he just stares out into space. DARVELL and GEORGINA,
Ianthe's parents, walk in quietly. Her mother carries a letter
in her hand.

                         DARVELL
               William?

                         GEORGINA
               William ... this letter came for
               you. From England, some time ago
               ... we thought it best not to
               burden you with it earlier, but ...

                         DARVELL
               It's an urgent communication,
               William. From your sister.

Ianthe's parents pause, hoping for some reaction, but there is
none.

                         DARVELL
               Just leave it for him, Georgina.
               I'm sure he'll soon recover from -

William suddenly jerks up in bed.

                         WILLIAM
               Ruthven! No, Ruthven, spare her!
               Take whomever you will, take me,
               save yourself, but spare Ianthe!

Ianthe's mother (Georgina) rushes to William's side and
attempts to calm him.

                         GEORGINA
               William....

                         WILLIAM
               You've destroyed her! My only love!
               You contemptible.... No! Spare her,
               Ruthven! If only her, spare her!
               Save us, Ruthven! Lord Ruthven,
               please, help me! Help me, please
               ... please, help me....

                         GEORGINA
               William, calm yourself. There is no
               Ruthven here. Ianthe is already ...
               she's already....

Georgina starts to WEEP, and the father walks over to take her
out of the room.

                         DARVELL
               Just leave him be. I have no doubt,
               he will recover. Just leave him be.

She places the letter from William's sister on a nightstand
beside the bed and exits with Ianthe's father.

CU - LETTER

"Urgent news" is written on the front of the letter and
underlined twice.

                         WILLIAM V.O.
               Help me ... Ruthven, help....

EXT. AUBREY HOME (GARDEN) - DAY

Christian and Mary sit on the stone benches outside the
fountain. Mary's face is twisted with a look of concern.

                         CHRISTIAN
               No reply at all?

                         MARY
               What do you think, Christian, that
               I'm lying to you? If I had gotten a
               reply, I surely would have told
               you.
                    (pause)
               I'm concerned, Christian ... I'm
               very concerned. This isn't at all
               like William, to not even respond
               to such a thing.
			   
                         CHRISTIAN
               Maybe he's on his way home.

                         MARY
               Without sending word ahead?

                         CHRISTIAN
               Considering that he could most
               likely arrive himself as quickly as
               his word could, maybe he simply
               chose not to send word?

                         MARY
               I suppose that's possible, but it
               just doesn't add up.

                         CHRISTIAN
               His last letter did say how happy
               he was.

                         MARY
               Exactly. Which makes me question
               why he would have left at all. I
               think he would have been more
               likely to simply write back, beg of
               us to wait for his return -

                         CHRISTIAN
               - with Ianthe.

                         MARY
               Right, with Ianthe. Chris, what if
               Lord Ruthven found him? I mean,
               what if he tracked him down and
               found him?

                         CHRISTIAN
               And what? Mary, you can't honestly
               think that Ruthven would do him any
               physical harm?

                         MARY
               And why not? What would stop him?
               The man has been doing enough harm
               around here, even though he left
               months ago. Certainly, you can
               argue that he may not have done
               physical harm directly, but
               somehow, I don't think Lord Mercer
               would agree with that.
                    (pause)
               People have died, Christian!
               I mean, what kind of a man can
               cause something like that to happen
               when he isn't even here?

                         CHRISTIAN
               How can you connect Ruthven to
               that, Mary? What evidence do you
               have?

                         MARY
               What evidence do I need? What
               evidence do you have that gives any
               other cause?

                         CHRISTIAN
               Why should I need any evidence?
               It's not like I'm trying to defend
               myself against anything,
               after all.

                         MARY
               Aren't you? Or perhaps you don't
               recall who introduced us to Lord
               Ruthven in the first place?

                         CHRISTIAN
               Oh, now you certainly can't be
               holding that against me!

                         MARY
               Why can't I?

Christian stands and walks over to the fountain.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Honestly, Mary, I feel I can hardly
               recognize you as the woman I love
               any longer. I love you for who you
               are, or who you have been, but ...
               I just don't know who you are
               anymore.

                         MARY
               The same woman I have always been.
               Can't you see that? Can't you see
               how I care for my brother, as I do
               care for you? And I can't imagine
               what that friend of yours has done
               to my brother.

Christian returns to the bench, sits beside Mary, and pulls
her into an embrace. Mary succumbs.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Anyone who could hurt you, or any
               member of your family, is no friend
               of mine.

Mary lies for a while in his arms, then sits up and glares.

                         MARY
               You're only trying to distract me.
               Despite your claims, you still have
               to admit you've supported Ruthven
               all along. You brought him to our
               table, all but invited him into our
               home, and did nothing to intervene
               on my brother's behalf.

                         CHRISTIAN
               What do you call the letter I
               suggested you write?

                         MARY
               Ha! You had your own motivations
               for that letter, Christian, and you
               know that!

                         CHRISTIAN
               Well, that may be so, but does that
               mean I don't care for your brother?

                         MARY
               Your intentions with me are
               certainly clear.
                    (pause)
               Or are they?

                         CHRISTIAN
               You know how I feel about you.

                         MARY
               Do I? I mean, you certainly know
               that William and I shall both be
               quite wealthy, once we're of age
               and our guardians release their
               hold on the Aubrey estate. It's all
               so clear! You seduce me, become my
               betrothed, then have this Ruthven
               make certain that William is not
               around to make any claims on the
               fortune! And God only knows what
               plans you have for me once I'm no
               longer needed as a means to my
               estate!

                         CHRISTIAN
               Mary! You're being simply
               ludicrous!

Mary stands and walks briskly toward the house.

                         MARY
               Fine. Maybe I am! You know your own
               way out. Good day, Christian.

Christian POUNDS his fist against the back of the bench in
frustration.

INT. IANTHE'S HOME (HALLWAY) - AFTERNOON

Ianthe's parents stand outside William's room, quietly looking
in. The curtains in his room are now open, and the late
afternoon sunlight casts shadows across the bed. Sitting in a
chair at the side of William's bed, CHATTING with an
apparently coherent William, is Lord Ruthven. Ruthven seems to
be a changed man, jovial and animated, as is William.

                         DARVELL
               And this is the Ruthven that
               William spoke of in his delirium?

                         GEORGINA
               I assume so. I mean, it's not as if
               I could ask William. How would you
               broach such a subject?

                         DARVELL
               I suppose you're right. Besides, I
               don't imagine he'd remember who he
               was speaking of while under the
               influence of such a violent fever.

They observe William and Ruthven a while longer. William says
something that causes Ruthven to LAUGH BOISTEROUSLY. It is the
laugh of the mysterious man, but William either doesn't notice
or doesn't care.

                         DARVELL (Cont.)
               William seems well, at any rate. I
               imagine he owes a debt of gratitude
               to this Lord Ruthven fellow.

                         GEORGINA
               Yes, I suppose so.

Ruthven and William LAUGH together.

                         DARVELL
               It's good to see the boy back to
               his old self.

                         GEORGINA
               How is this back to his old self?
               He still hardly leaves his bed. His
               delirium certainly seems to have
               passed, but still -

Georgina is interrupted as William notices that he and Ruthven
are being watched.

                         WILLIAM
               Georgina, Darvell! Please, a moment
               of your time. Ruthven, of course
               you've met Ianthe's parents.

INT. IANTHE'S HOME (WILLIAM'S ROOM) - DAY

Darvell and Georgina, smiles on their faces, enter the room.
Ruthven stands and offers his chair to Georgina.

                         RUTHVEN
               Please, sit.

Georgina nods her head "thank you" and takes the chair.

                         WILLIAM
               You know the two of you have my
               deepest sympathies at the loss of
               one so fair as Ianthe.

                         DARVELL
               Please, William ... you, too have
               lost -

                         WILLIAM
               No, I will hear nothing of what I
               have lost, Darvell. There can be no
               greater loss than the loss of a
               child. As for what I have lost.
                    (pause)
               What I have found is that I have a
               great many friends and supporters.
               In you, in the gracious Lord
               Ruthven, and in the villagers who
               have stood by and inquired of me,
               despite ... despite the fact that I
               was unable to help -

                         DARVELL
               Enough, William. What is it you
               wish to say?

William takes a moment to regain his composure.

                         WILLIAM
               The time has come for me to move
               on. I'm well enough again, and
               Ruthven has suggested a trip
               through the mountains, the thought
               of which appeals to me greatly. It
               will allow me a chance to clear my
               head before my return to London.

Darvell and Georgina exchange openmouthed looks.

                         GEORGINA
               But, William ... have you not
               heard? The-the dangers in the
               mountains? The robbers?

                         DARVELL
               Aye, William, she speaks the truth.
               Many have returned from there with
               stories, took upon by robbers ...
               with firearms. Some have left in
               pairs and returned alone. Guards
               and guides alike are providing
               stern warnings against -

Ruthven dismisses this with a wave of his hand.

                         RUTHVEN
               Nonsense, sir. Merely a fiction
               created by these same guards and
               guides so that they might raise
               their fees for guarding and
               guiding. I assure you, William and
               I will be quite fine on our own.

                         DARVELL
               And there is nothing I might do to
               convince you to stay with us,
               William?
                    (pause)
               We have come to think of you as ...
               well, as something of a son, I
               suppose.

                         WILLIAM
               Touched as I am by your sentiment,
               I'm afraid commitments would prompt
               my return to London shortly anyway.
               Which reminds me....

William reaches into a drawer in the nightstand next to his
bed and pulls out a sealed letter.

                         WILLIAM (Cont.)
               You'll see that this is sent back
               to London for me, won't you?

Georgina takes the letter.

                         GEORGINA
               Certainly, William.
                    (pause)
               A letter to your sister, I suppose?

                         WILLIAM
               Of course. She's been fearing for
               me unnecessarily since before I
               even left on this trip, and I can't
               imagine what she's thinking since
               she hasn't heard from me for so
               long. Ruthven and I will be off on
               our brief mountain excursion, and
               with any luck, the letter will
               reach London before my return.

                         GEORGINA
               I'll see to it, William.

                         DARVELL
               Do be careful, my boy.

                         WILLIAM
               Yes, yes ... I always am.

FADE TO:

EXT. MOUNTAINS - DUSK

Ruthven follows William down a rocky path between two
outcroppings of rock. The sun settles behind the mountains,
casting long shadows in front of them. They each carry a small
pack of their belongings.

They walk along in silence for a while until a SCUTTLING SOUND
behind them causes William to suddenly halt his progress.
Ruthven nearly walks into William as William stops, turns back
to the sun, and strains to listen.

Ruthven turns around for a moment and SQUINTS into the bright
sun behind them. He WINCES almost as if in pain.

                         RUTHVEN
               What is it?

William SHUSHES him and continues his attempts to hear.
Another moment passes, and Ruthven finally grows impatient.

                         RUTHVEN
               Come on, Aubrey, it's obvious
               there's nothing there. Let's go
               already.

William doesn't react.

                         RUTHVEN (Cont.)
               Let's move, William!

Ruthven nudges William into motion just as the sound of a
single GUNSHOT splits the air. William dives to the ground and
drags Ruthven into the dust with him.

                         WILLIAM
               Down!

The air again falls silent as William looks around for a safe
spot of shelter. He spots a large boulder about a hundred
yards ahead of them and indicates it to Ruthven.

                         WILLIAM
                    (quietly)
               There. I'll crawl over; you follow.

Ruthven nods.

William begins to crawl along the rocks toward the shelter.
Ruthven remains lying on the ground, looking to the rocks
around them to see if he can spot anyone.

EXT. MOUNTAINS (BEHIND BOULDER) - DUSK

William raises himself up on his knees and peers around the
boulder to Ruthven. Ruthven does not move, but lies on the
ground, listening. William motions for Ruthven to follow him
behind the boulder.

Ruthven does not move.

                         WILLIAM
                    (whispering, barely audible)
               Ruthven.

No reaction.

                         WILLIAM
                    (a little louder)
               Ruthven.

Ruthven turns back but waves William off. He sits up
cautiously and begins to look around until it appears that he
has spotted something. He turns back to William and gestures
to the outcropping of rock to his left.

Just as William looks to the source of Ruthven's gesture,
another SHOT is fired.

                         WILLIAM
               Ruthven!

A third shot RESOUNDS immediately - this time catching Ruthven
in the left shoulder. Ruthven SCREAMS out in apparent agony as
William rushes out from behind the boulder.

EXT. MOUNTAINS - DUSK

Ruthven is lying on his back. The remaining sun is streaking
down onto his body. His right hand, covered in blood, grips
his left shoulder.

As William rushes out to check on his friend, two ROBBERS
descend from the outcroppings of rock above. They are all
brandishing pistols.

                         WILLIAM
               Ruthven, are you hurt?

                         RUTHVEN
               Am I hurt? What the devil does it
               look like, you simpleton!? Of
               course I'm hurt!

                         ROBBER 1 (to Robber 2)
               See? I told ya you hit 'im! Damned
               if that ain't the finest shot I
               ever saw!

                         ROBBER 2
               As if it mattered.
                    (to William)
               Gentlemen, let's have your
               valuables. Come on, out with 'em.

                         WILLIAM
               Varlet! Can't you see the man's
               hurt? Give me a damned moment!

William tries to tend to Ruthven's wounds, but Robber 1 pulls
him away. Ruthven lets out a pained GRUNT.

                         ROBBER 1
               Try that again, and you'll be in
               the same state as your friend here,
               understand? I believe you were just
               asked for your valuables. Why don't
               we tend to that first, okay?

William makes a move as if to lunge at the man, but Ruthven
manages to forcefully GRAB him before he can get himself into
any trouble.

                         RUTHVEN
               William, no!

A brief moment passes while William decides on the best course
of action. He attempts to negotiate:

                         WILLIAM
               Sir, surely you can wait a moment
               for me to tend to my friend's wound
               here. One way or another, you'll
               get what you -

He is cut off as Robber 1 lowers his gun and FIRES two shots
into Ruthven's wounded shoulder. Ruthven lets out another YELP
of pain.

                         WILLIAM
               NO!

William throws himself across Ruthven's body to shield it from
any further shots.

                         ROBBER 1
               Hesitate any more, and you're going
               to have quite a few more wounds to
               tend to. Just give us what we want,
               and we'll be on our way.

William looks up at the robbers, down at Ruthven, and finally
makes up his mind. He takes the two packs that he and Ruthven
were carrying and HURLS them toward one of the outcroppings of
rock.

                         WILLIAM
               There! Perfect! Take it; take it
               all! For what have I left to live
               for? The love of my life, my Ianthe
               ... dead! My friend ... wounded by
               ... by ... the likes of you! My
               sister, set to wed before her life
               has even begun! I cannot take
               anything more! You want what's left
               of my life? Take it! Why should
               someone such as myself, someone
               bereft of possessions of the heart,
               of the soul ... why should I
               possess worldly goods? What right
               have I to any possessions at all? I
               who cannot protect those who mean
               so much to me? For I have no need
               to live, I have no need to save
               myself ... how can I, when I cannot
               save my Ianthe, my-my Mary, my-my
               -my-

                         ROBBER 2
               Yeah, thanks.

The two robbers walk over, pick up the packs, and depart over
the hills. William collapses to the ground, exhausted from his
emotional outpouring. He has apparently forgotten about
Ruthven entirely.

                         RUTHVEN
               William?

Ruthven struggles to prop himself up on his good arm and look
over at William. Finally, William lifts his head and looks at
Ruthven.

                         WILLIAM
               I-I'm sorry, Ruthven. Can I ... is
               there anything I can do? Are you
               ... will you be all right? Or is it
               ... I mean, how badly are you
               wounded?

                         RUTHVEN
               William, your assistance is greatly
               appreciated, as always.

                         WILLIAM
               But what? What have I done? What
               can I do?

He walks over to Ruthven and is sickened by the mere sight of
his wounds. Blood has been spattered across the side of
Ruthven's face and the front of his body. His right hand still
grips his left shoulder, though blood no longer flows from the
wounds. His left arm has practically been severed from his
body. Surprisingly, however, Ruthven seems quite calm - his
face shows no pain or fear for his life.

                         RUTHVEN
               You may save me yet.

                         WILLIAM
               But.... Lord Ruthven, I fear these
               wounds will prove quite fatal. I
               don't see how I can possibly save
               you!

                         RUTHVEN
               But save me you must!

                         WILLIAM
               How can I save your life now? The
               wounds, Ruthven, the-the gunshots,
               the blood....

                         RUTHVEN
               I do not refer to my life, William.
               The death of my earthly existence
               means as little to me as the
               passing of the day. But William, if
               you heed me as a friend, as a
               compatriot, you may yet save my
               honor.

                         WILLIAM
               Anything, my friend.

                         RUTHVNE
               Help me, William.

                         WILLIAM
               But how? Please, Vincent, tell me
               how. I would do anything - anything
               at all to assist you; you need
               merely ask.

                         RUTHVEN
               I ask but little of you. I have
               little time left....

Ruthven takes a deep, apparently painful breath and slowly
lets it out through his mouth. He adjusts the position of his
body, sits up a bit, and lets out a weak GRUNT.

                         RUTHVEN (Cont.)
               I fear I cannot explain the whole
               situation, for I have such little
               time left. But ... if you could
               conceal all you know of me - all
               you have learned, all you have
               discovered, all you have presumed.
               If my honor were to remain intact,
               my character to remain unstained in
               the world's mouth.... And-and if
               ... if my death were to remain
               unknown for some time back in
               England. I believe ... I believe
               that....

His strength waning, Ruthven collapses back onto the ground.
William rushes to his side and cradles the dying man's head in
his hands.

                         WILLIAM
               It shall not be known.

Ruthven once again struggles to a sitting position. An all
-too-familiar LIGHT glows behind his eyes. He seems, in fact,
to become quite animated - almost energetic - as he speaks.

                         RUTHVEN
               Swear! Swear to it, William. Swear
               by all your soul reveres, by all
               your heart desires, and by all your
               nature fears! Swear that for a year
               and a day you shall not impart any
               knowledge of me that you have
               obtained upon any living being in
               any way. Any knowledge of ... of my
               crimes, of my misdeeds ... of my
               death. Whatever you may see,
               whatever may happen, swear,
               William, that you will not reveal
               any of this to anyone!

                         WILLIAM
               I swear!

                         RUTHVEN
               You must, William ... you must
               uphold this oath. Do not reveal my
               life or my death. One year and one
               day!

Ruthven again collapses to the ground with a GRUNT.

                         RUTHVEN (Cont.)
               By all that ... all that you love
               ... all you hold sacred.
                    (pause)
               William: Remember your oath.

                         WILLIAM
               Yes! Yes, Ruthven! You have my
               word! Upon my very soul, I do
               swear!

Finally, Ruthven DIES. William collapses on the ground next to
him, obviously the victim of extreme emotional distress. His
body begins to shake as some BREATHY NOISES emanate from him,
but it is unclear whether he is sobbing or laughing with
relief.

                         WILLIAM (Cont.)
               I will uphold my oath!

William tends to Ruthven's body, cleaning the blood in futile
respect for his friend.

                         WILLIAM V.O.
               "I can say with certainty, Mary,
               that he will not be accompanying me
               upon my return. But I can say no
               more. And though I understand you
               always abhorred the man in life, I
               ask that if you speak of him, you
               do so respectfully ... for he was
               my friend."

FADE TO:

INT. AUBREY HOME (FOYER) - DAY

TITLE CARD: "London, July 1819"

Mary sits on a bench, idly holding a letter from William in
her lap. She is not reading the letter, but simply stares at
the front door in expectation.

                         WILLIAM V.O.
               "The last few months of my life
               have been almost impossible,
               Dearheart. I long for the return to
               my native England far more than you
               can possibly imagine. I shall come
               home as soon as affairs are
               settled, with any luck perhaps even
               arriving before this letter. As
               always, William."

Using some sort of sixth sense, Mary rises and walks to the
door a moment before a KNOCK is heard from the other side.
After a considerable pause, as Mary continues to stare at the
door, she opens it to Christian, who waits patiently on the
other side.

                         CHRISTIAN
               I came as soon as I received your
               request, Mary. From your message, I
               gathered his ... well, he's fine,
               right?

                         MARY
               Not here, Christian. Outside. In
               the garden.

EXT. GARDEN - DAY

Christian and Mary stand by the fountain, talking in hushed
tones.

                         CHRISTIAN
               So William is unscathed, and
               Ruthven will not be returning? Then
               all is as you've hoped.

                         MARY
               Well, apparently, though I must
               wonder what exactly happened out
               there. I know my brother always
               seemed fond of your Lord Ruthven
               ... I mean, he still does. Supports
               the man even now. It just seems
               peculiar.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Oh? How so?

                         MARY
               Made an entreaty in his last
               letter. Asked me to "speak of him
               respectfully," or something to that
               effect. I tell you, Christian,
               something happened out there -
               something William is choosing not
               to share. But I know not what, and
               that concerns me.

Christian shakes his head and walks to one of the stone
benches.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Of course. I should have known.

Obviously upset, Mary walks over and stands in front of
Christian, who has now sat down on one of the benches. He
looks up at her.

                         CHRISTIAN
               What?

                         MARY
               I might ask the same question of
               you. You should have known what,
               exactly, Christian? That your plans
               would not be successful?

                         CHRISTIAN
               I thought I explained that I had no
               plans.

                         MARY
               Well, what then?

                         CHRISTIAN
               You can't exactly deny the feelings
               you have for Lord Ruthven, Mary.

                         MARY
               Feelings? Why, I feel nothing but
               utter hatred for that monster! How
               could I have made that any more
               clear? He is a contemptible,
               contemptible man. I could not be
               more pleased that he won't be
               returning. The fact that you could
               even imply -

                         CHRISTIAN
               Methinks the lady doth protest too
               much.

Mary gears up as if to launch a retort - or a fist - in
Christian's direction, but thinks better of it. She releases a
HMPH sound, then turns her back and walks to the fountain.

Christian shakes his head, then reluctantly gets up and
follows Mary to the fountain. He stands beside her as they
both gaze into the fountain's flowing waters.

                         CHRISTIAN
               I'm sorry.
                    (pause)
               You still must admit, hate is
               hardly the antithesis of love. I'm
               certain there have been times that
               you've hated me. I don't doubt that
               for a moment.

He puts his arm around Mary's shoulder, but she THROWS it off
and spins to face him.

                         MARY
               I think this is one of those times.

She walks back toward the house, o.s., leaving Christian
alone, staring after her.

INT. COACH (MOVING) - AFTERNOON

William sits alone, bound for home. He stares out the window
as the coach cuts through the countryside. His thoughts are
obviously elsewhere....

                         RUTHVEN V.O.
               I fear I cannot explain the whole
               situation, for I have such little
               time left. But ... if you could
               conceal all you know of me - all
               you have learned, all you have
               discovered, all you have presumed.

                         WILLIAM V.O.
               It shall not be known.

                         RUTHVEN V.O.
               Swear! Swear to it, William. Swear
               by all your soul reveres, by all
               your heart desires, and by all your
               nature fears! Swear that for a year
               and a day you shall not impart any
               knowledge of me that you have
               obtained upon any living being in
               any way. Whatever you may see,
               whatever may happen, swear,
               William, that you will not reveal
               any of this to anyone!

                         WILLIAM V.O.
               Yes! Yes, Ruthven! You have my
               word! Upon my very soul, I do
               swear!

EXT. AUBREY HOME - AFTERNOON

William's coach pulls up to his home and stops behind another
coach. As William opens the door to his coach, the driver of
the other coach CLICKS his tongue and flicks the reins,
spurring his horse into motion.

William exits his coach as Mary emerges from the front door of
the house.

                         MARY
               William!

She runs up to the coach, a smile beaming on her face. William
merely stands there and waits as she practically KNOCKS him
over, running into him, and pulling him into an embrace.

                         MARY (Cont.)
               Oh, William, how I've missed you!
               I've just felt so alone the entire
               time you've been on this dreadful
               trip of yours.

No reaction from William. He simply stands there, staring
dully back at his sister.

                         MARY (Cont.)
               What is it? What's wrong?

Finally, a little animation flickers behind his eyes.

                         WILLIAM
               Have you? Have you missed me, Mary?
               Have you felt so alone? Or has my
               "friend" Christian seen to it that
               such problems did not befall you in
               my absence?

                         MARY
               Why...? William, six months I have
               not seen you and this is how you
               greet me?

                         WILLIAM
               Oh, stop this charade, Mary. Do you
               take your brother for a fool? Did
               you think for but a moment that
               this was not how I would
               greet you? Can you honestly expect
               me to believe, with what you were
               writing me, with your plans with
               Christian!

Mary is too shocked and upset to defend herself. She begins to
SOB quietly, but tries her best to hide it from William.

                         WILLIAM (Cont.)
               Tell me one thing, Mary. Was any of
               it true? Have you and Christian
               already planned to wed, or was this
               all merely a fiction designed to
               get me to cut my trip short?

Mary can no longer hold back her emotions, and she begins to
SOB openly. William realizes almost immediately what he has
done. He reaches out to comfort her, but she PUSHES him away
roughly.

                         MARY
               No! None of it is true ... not now,
               not anymore.
                    (pause)
               And how crude, how inconsiderate of
               you, William! How could you ...
               greet me with this?

William once again reaches out to comfort his sister; this
time, she does not resist. A SERVANT begins removing William's
trunks from the coach.

                         WILLIAM
               Please, forgive me, Dearheart. If
               you could only know what I have
               been through.
                    (pause)
               But no, what I have been through is
               no excuse. Even if it were, I shall
               make no excuses for my actions any
               longer. Mary, you're all I have
               left.

Mary remains in his arms until her SOBBING eventually begins
to subside. William holds her at arm's length and looks into
her eyes.

                         MARY
               Oh, William....

                         WILLIAM
               Yes?

                         MARY
               William, it's simply not entirely
               your fault. It's Christian. Ever
               since you've gone away, he's
               become, well ... increasingly
               infuriating.

                         WILLIAM
               How so?

                         MARY
               I can't say exactly.

William reads his sister's face.

                         WILLIAM
               The letter was his idea, was it
               not? I know my friend well enough
               to recognize his hand when I see
               it. I tell you, Mary, if he has
               forced himself upon you in even the
               slightest way, I'll see to it that
               he doesn't -

                         MARY
               No, no ... it's not that at all. I
               mean yes, the letter was his idea.
               But at the time, I was as
               enthusiastic about the notion of
               engagement as he was. I just don't
               know.
                    (pause)
               William?

                         WILLIAM
               Yes, Dearheart?

                         MARY
               Is it possible to fall out
               of love?

                         WILLIAM
               I can only hope.

The servant, having finished removing the three trunks from
the coach, approaches.

                         SERVANT
               Sir? Shall I bring these inside?

                         WILLIAM
               Oh, yes, certainly. To my room.
               I'll be right in.

                         MARY
               Three trunks? I thought you only
               brought two of them with you. Oh,
               now you certainly can't be bringing
               back such an inordinate amount of
               memorabilia!

William walks toward the house.

                         WILLIAM
               The third is ... nothing, not my
               own. I mean, nothing to be
               concerned with.

William enters the house. Mary just stands there, slightly
dazed.

INT. AUBREY HOME (WILLIAM'S ROOM) - EVENING

The servant, aided by a young HELPER, places the third trunk
in a corner of a room, directed by William. Mary watches from
the doorway.

                         MARY
               Where exactly do you plan to put
               all these things, anyway?

                         WILLIAM
               I told you, it's nothing to be
               concerned with.

                         MARY
               Oh, I can't help but be curious.
               You leave with one man's
               possessions, and you return with
               enough for two!

                         WILLIAM
               Don't be absurd. It's only one more
               trunk.

                         MARY
               Certainly, but this trunk is big
               enough to hold a dead body!

                         WILLIAM
               Mary!

Mary suddenly realizes she may have let a major faux pas slip.

                         MARY
               Oh, William ... Ianthe! Oh, I
               certainly didn't mean ... I'm so
               sorry!

                         WILLIAM
               No, no.
                    (pause)
               I'm the one who should apologize.
               I'm still tired from my trip. And
               besides, I'm sure you have a lot on
               your mind, with your first drawing
               room as a member of society
               tomorrow night. That is tomorrow
               night, is it not? I wanted to be
               sure I returned in time.

                         MARY
               Yes, William. Tomorrow. And I can
               only hope Christian is not the only
               man there vying for my hand.

                         WILLIAM
               I'm certain he won't be the only
               choice. As certain as I am that
               he'll be the best choice all the
               same.

                         MARY
               I wouldn't be so certain of
               anything.

                         WILLIAM
               Well, regardless ... I think I
               should just get to sleep now - I
               won't be of any use to anyone
               tomorrow if I'm still in this
               condition.

                         MARY
               Oh, very well. I think I'll go take
               a walk in the garden before
               retiring. The summer night air has
               always helped clear my head.
               Goodnight, William.

                         WILLIAM
               Goodnight, Dearheart.

She exits. William just stares after her, the concerned older
brother.

EXT. AUBREY HOME (GARDEN) - DUSK

The night carries few noises other than those of the fountain
GURGLING its waters into the air. The sun has just set. Only
an occasional passing cloud blocks a brilliant crescent moon.

Mary walks into this scene, further enhancing its beauty. She
circles the fountain, staring into its center, then eventually
sits on one of the benches.

                         MARY
               Ah, Christian. Tomorrow you must
               attempt to earn back what was once
               yours for the taking.

Mary takes a DEEP BREATH, enjoying the night air. After
staring at the fountain a few moments, she hears a RUSTLING
off in the garden.

She turns her head about, trying to find the source of the
noise. Just as she's nearly satisfied that it was merely her
imagination playing tricks on her, the RUSTLING repeats. Now
certain of the direction, she jerks her head to her left.

P.O.V. MARY:

A pair of glowing eyes flashes for a moment in the darkness of
the garden. As if sensing they were seen, they disappear in an
instant.

                         MARY (O.S.)
               Who is it? Who's there?

END P.O.V.

Mary stands.

                         MARY (Cont.)
               Christian?

FADE TO:

INT. AUBREY HOME (WILLIAM'S ROOM) - MORNING

Brilliant sunshine floods the room from an open window. A
gentle breeze ruffles the canopy about William's bed.

William has set himself about the task of unpacking the
trunks. One empty trunk stands in a corner of the room, and
another nearly empty one sits open on a low table. The third
trunk - the largest -sits on the floor by the table, closed.
William removes some clothing from the open trunk and carries
it to a bureau.

A mournful look comes across William's face as he returns to
look in the trunk. He stands and stares into it for a moment,
as if he cannot bear to remove the next item. A tear forms in
his eye and rolls down his cheek.

                         WILLIAM
               Ianthe....

Finally, he reaches in and pulls out the offending item: the
oddly-shaped dagger with which Ianthe was killed. Her blood
still stains the blade. William drops to his knees and hugs
the dagger to his body - the last reminder he has of the woman
he loved.

As William continues to mourn his lost love, Mary suddenly
strides into his room. William's back is turned to her.

                         MARY
               William, I was wondering what you
               thought might be most appropriate
               for me to wear to the drawing-room
               this evening. I was thinking of the
               red gown our guardians got for me
               summer last, but I'm just not sure
               if that would be fitting. What do
               you think?

No response.

                         MARY
               William?

With a look of combined anger and despair, William stands and
turns to face his sister. Tears cover his face. He slams the
lid of his trunk closed.

                         WILLIAM
               Not now, Mary!

Shocked and dismayed, Mary slowly backs out of the room and
shuts the door.

William kneels again and turns back to contemplating the
dagger. He runs his finger slowly across its blade, tracing
the odd shape. He grips its handle, tests its weight....

                         WILLIAM
               Had I only been able to get there
               sooner, Ianthe ... Had I only been
               able to help you.

He places the dagger down on the table and turns his head to
the large trunk.

                         WILLIAM (Cont.)
               Or you, Ruthven.

William stands, wipes the tears from his face with the back of
his hand, then places his hands atop the trunk. With a DEEP
BREATH, he undoes the trunk's latch and lifts its lid.

Carefully, he begins lifting items out and placing them neatly
on the closed lid of his own. Gradually, neat stacks of
clothes, papers, and books form. Eventually, William stops and
gapes into the trunk with a dumbfounded look.

                         WILLIAM
               What's this...?

Reaching his hands back into the trunk, William pulls out
several daggers and other blades. He turns each one over in
his hands as he takes them out, examining their form. They are
all meticulously clean; the sunlight glints off each one as it
turns in William's hands.

Finally, he stops again, and just stares into the trunk. Tears
again start to form. He turns back to the oddly-shaped dagger
on the table and picks it up. Reaching into the large trunk,
he pulls out a small, ornate, leather sheath.

                         WILLIAM
               It can't be....

But it is. Placing the oddly-shaped dagger into the sheath,
William discovers they are a perfect fit. A SHUDDER runs
through his body and another tear rolls down his cheek. He
restores everything to the third trunk and slowly closes the
lid.

INT. AUBREY HOME (MARY'S ROOM) - LATER THAT MORNING

Mary is busying herself with preparations for the evening's
drawing-room. A young lady servant, CARMILLA, walks into the
room.

                         CARMILLA
               Begging your pardon Miss Aubrey,
               but, well....

                         MARY
               Yes, Carmilla. What is it?

                         CARMILLA
               It's Christian. Here to see you.

                         MARY
               Christian? What the devil does he
               want at this time of morning?

                         CARMILLA
               I'm certain I don't know, Miss. But
               he was rather insistent that he see
               you.

William appears in the doorway. He looks haggard and pale.

                         MARY
               Well, just tell him he'll have to
               wait for tonight like any other
               gentleman. I don't see any reason I
               should be giving him special
               treatment at this point.

                         CARMILLA
               You're sure, Miss?

                         MARY
               Quite sure. Only ... do make it
               clear I'll see him tonight.

                         CARMILLA
               Yes, Miss.

Carmilla exits. William just stands in the doorway until Mary
eventually notices him.

                         MARY
               William? Is there something you
               wanted?
                    (pause)
               My god, you look as if you've just
               seen a ghost.

                         WILLIAM
               Maybe I have.

Mary guides William into her room and sits him in a large,
padded chair. He just stares into the distance.

                         MARY
               What is it, William? What's
               happened?

Another moment of staring, then William comes to suddenly, as
if being brought out of a trance.

                         WILLIAM
               It's ... nothing, Mary. At least
               nothing I have the liberty to
               discuss at this time.

                         MARY
               Then when?

                         WILLIAM
               Later.

                         MARY
               Tonight then? At the drawing-room?

William LAUGHS softly.

                         WILLIAM
               Oh, later than that, I fear. I'm
               quite sure it's nothing, anyway.
               Probably just my mind playing
               tricks on me. Yes, that's it. Just
               haven't recovered from my trip yet.

                         MARY
               If you're sure you don't wish to
               discuss it, then.

                         WILLIAM
               Did I hear correctly? Is Christian
               come to call this morning?

                         MARY
               I'm afraid so.

                         WILLIAM
               I've half a mind to speak with him
               myself. See if he'll be willing to
               tell me exactly what's going on
               between the two of you. I'm
               certainly not getting answers from
               you.

                         MARY
               Oh, I really wish you wouldn't do
               that, brother. This is between
               myself and Christian.

William SMILES.

                         WILLIAM
               Well, I certainly wouldn't want to
               incur your wrath, my dear. I
               suppose I can wait until this
               evening.

                         MARY
               I can say this much: He hasn't
               fallen out of my favor entirely.
               He's just going to have to approach
               me as any other suitor might.

William stands and walks to the window.

INSERT (EXT. AUBREY HOME - MORNING): Christian mounts a horse,
and with a flick of the reins, he hastens away.

                         WILLIAM
               I'm sure he's up to the challenge.

                         MARY
               We'll see.

                                                      FADE TO:

INT. COACH (MOVING) - EVENING

Mary sits across from William in a small coach led by a single
horse. She is dressed in the red gown that she alluded to
earlier. William is dressed in black.

                         WILLIAM
               Where is this again?

                         MARY
               How many times must I tell you,
               William? It's at Lord Jonas's
               estate. Out in the country? You
               said yourself it would be the
               perfect place for my "official"
               entry into the scene.

                         WILLIAM
               Yes, of course. My apologies,
               Dearheart ... my mind is elsewhere.

                         MARY
               Still abroad, no doubt.

                         WILLIAM
               Oh, maybe, I suppose. I still think
               I might've been better off back
               home, rather than hinder you with
               my thoughtlessness.

                         MARY
               Nonsense. I need you here. Besides,
               I wouldn't think to leave you alone
               to swim in your melancholy. You
               haven't been stable of mind since
               you returned from your trip. Being
               out among people will do you good.

William forces a SMILE.

                         WILLIAM
               How like you, to be concerned about
               your pitiful brother when this day
               should be special for only you.

                         MARY
               Don't bother yourself about that.

EXT. JONAS ESTATE - EVENING

The Jonas Estate is nestled among rolling hills in the English
countryside. It is another crisp, clear evening as Mary and
William's coach pulls up to the back of a short line of
coaches. The line winds along a rocky path that leads up to
the main building on the estate - a huge, white, pillared
mansion.

As the coach reaches the front of the line, Christian can be
seen waiting by the front door. Beside Christian stands the
EARL OF MARSDEN. Marsden is a young man with short brown hair,
who bears a resemblance to Lord Ruthven. As William opens the
door to his coach, Marsden enters the mansion.

                         CHRISTIAN
               William! How wonderful to see you
               again, my friend. I trust this
               evening finds you in good health?

                         WILLIAM
               Good enough, I suppose.

William exits the coach and helps his sister out behind him.
Christian and Mary gaze at each other, but neither can seem to
find the words to speak. William attempts to break the
tension.

                         WILLIAM
               Um ... quite the crowd here
               tonight. I suppose we should head
               inside, Mary? People are probably
               expecting to see you.

                         MARY
               Yes ... certainly.

William takes Mary's arm and leads her inside, with an
apologetic glance at Christian. Christian follows a few steps
behind.

INT. JONAS DRAWING ROOM - EVENING

The huge room is packed nearly shoulder-to-shoulder with
GUESTS. A small but LOUD orchestra is situated under a large
window to one side of the room. A section of floor in front of
the orchestra has been set aside for dancing; several COUPLES
twirl to the music.

SERVANTS weave through the crowd, offering platters of food
and drink to the guests. The large, boisterous crowd seems to
be thoroughly enjoying itself.

William walks Mary into the middle of this scene and lets her
go. Mary mouths a few words of protest, but we cannot hear for
the NOISE of the crowd and the orchestra. Eventually, Mary
goes off on her own, and William retreats to a corner of the
room.

INT. JONAS DRAWING ROOM (WILLIAM'S CORNER) - EVENING

William grabs a glass of wine off a tray as a servant zips by.
He attempts in vain to find a spot to stand that has a bit of
elbow room - the crowd is simply too big. He goes to take a
sip of wine, but someone jostles him. He jerks his head to the
right.

                         RUTHVEN'S VOICE
               William ... remember your oath.

No one is there.

William stands, fixed in his position. He moves nothing but
his eyes, which sweep the room in search of the source of the
voice he has just heard. Finally, he spots a figure across the
room. His eyes lock, and all the color drains from his face.

P.O.V. WILLIAM:

The Earl of Marsden stands in a small group, drinking and
laughing heartily.

END P.O.V.

                         WILLIAM
               It can't be!

A small group of FRIENDS near William turn to him at this
outburst. One starts to CHUCKLE, but a second motions for him
to stop.

                         SECOND FRIEND
               Sir? I say, sir? Is everything
               alright?

William responds by dropping his glass of wine to the floor
with a CRASH. His legs give out, and he nearly drops to the
floor himself before the second friend grabs him. The first
friend begins to CHUCKLE again.

                         FIRST FRIEND
               Well, this one seems to have been
               into the drink a bit early,
               wouldn't you say?

                         SECOND FRIEND
               I would guess he has.

Having spotted William from across the room, Christian makes
his way over.

                         SECOND FRIEND (Cont.)
               You don't suppose he came in with
               anyone, do you?

                         CHRISTIAN
               William ... what is it? What's
               happened?

                         FIRST FRIEND
               There's your answer.

                         SECOND FRIEND
               Seems your friend's had a bit much
               to drink already, sir. I'd be happy
               to help you out with him.
                    (pause)
               If that's what you'll want to be
               doing, of course.

Christian turns his head, looking about the room to see if he
can spot Mary.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Ah ... yes, I suppose that's for
               the best. Just bring him out front;
               I'll find his coach driver and meet
               you there. And thank you for your
               kindness.

                         SECOND FRIEND
               My pleasure.

The second friend leads William gingerly toward the exit.
Christian starts weaving his way into the crowd, getting
pushed this way and that as he walks.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Damn ... where have you gotten to,
               Mary?

Christian eventually gives up his attempts to work through the
crowd. He stops, takes one final look around, and SIGHS.  With
a new determination in his step, he heads for the door.

INT. JONAS DRAWING ROOM (DANCING FLOOR) - EVENING

Mary, with a beaming smile on her face, waltzes with a young
BLOND MAN. She seems to be enjoying herself immensely, until
she spies Christian scurrying out of the drawing room. Her
smile subsides.

INT. AUBREY HOME (LIBRARY) - DAY

Mary sits in one of the leather-backed library chairs, sipping
from a cup of tea. She stares at the stacks of books and waits
patiently. Eventually, Christian steps out with a thick book
open in his hands.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Here we are. I'm sure this volume
               can offer some answers to William's
               dementia. How long has he been like
               this now?

                         MARY
               Christian, I really don't wish for
               you to attempt to solve my
               brother's health problems. It's not
               your place to do anything of the
               kind. In fact, I'm not entirely
               sure what your place is in my home
               at all.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Humor me, Mary ... will you,
               please? On just this one topic, try
               to at least work with me instead of
               against me? Is this so much to ask?

No answer.

                         CHRISTIAN (Cont.)
               I've accepted the fact that if you
               ever did love me, you no longer do.
               I can accept that much. I cannot be
               pleased with it, but I can accept
               it. What I cannot accept is that
               you no longer love your brother. If
               there were ever two people more
               clearly meant to be related
               than you and William, I have surely
               not encountered them. Nor do I ever
               expect to encounter such a pair.
               You love your brother, Mary. And he
               loves you, perhaps even more. For
               him Mary, not for me, can we just
               cooperate on this matter? I do what
               I do to help him. I have no
               selfish motives.

Mary finishes her tea and places the cup and saucer on a table
beside the chair.

                         MARY
               Three weeks. He's hardly left his
               room in the past three weeks.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Good heavens! It's been that long?

                         MARY
               You're the one who extracted him
               from that drawing-room.

Christian begins thumbing through the book.

                         MARY (Cont.)
               Really, Christian ... you can't
               expect to find any answer in there.
               I think it's past time to call in
               the doctor, see if he can't help my
               brother.

Christian SIGHS and shuts the book.

                         CHRISTIAN
               I suppose you may be right. I
               simply don't like feeling like I
               can't be of any help when it comes
               to a friend such as William. I must
               do all I can to speed his recovery.
                    (pause)
               And if that means medical help,
               then so be it. Who knows, perhaps
               he might even be well enough by
               tomorrow night to accompany you to
               your aunt's.

INT. AUBREY HOME (WILLIAM'S ROOM) - DAY

William quickly paces back and forth across the length of the
room. His clothes are unwashed, and his face has a scraggly
mess of a beard. The bags under his eyes make it look as if he
hasn't slept in weeks. The distant voices of Christian and
Mary waft into the room:

                         MARY (O.S.)
               I'm surprised you'd even mention
               such an event. Strictly arranged to
               marry me off, I've no doubt.

                         CHRISTIAN (O.S.)
               Why be surprised then? Just because
               I'm convinced you no longer love me
               doesn't mean I'm convinced I can
               never win you back.

                         MARY (O.S.)
               Judging by the drawing-room the
               other week, you'll certainly have
               your competition.

William ceases his pacing at this last statement. He swings
his head toward his door and stares at it in disbelief for a
moment.

                         WILLIAM
               Mary, married! I-I had never even
               considered it up to now, but ...
               alas, what an addle-minded fool am
               I. Of course, marriage!

He begins pacing again, now with his hands gripping the sides
of his head tightly.

                         WILLIAM
               But what of ... the fiend! Should
               she, or should Christian ... should
               Mary encounter him, should either,
               they'll know not what to expect!
               No, still ... it's still simply not
               possible what I saw. What I saw, I
               could not have seen! Or perhaps I
               have indeed gone mad.

The pacing again stops, and William turns back to the door.

                         WILLIAM
               Proof, is what I need. If I only
               could see the man again, could
               prove that what I saw was indeed
               what I saw, then....

                    (pause)
               But the oath. Oh, oath be damned if
               what I saw was what I saw! How
               could I allow such a man to move
               among society freely, as freely as
               might I.

William's eyes light up, as if he's suddenly found the answer
to an ancient riddle. He begins pacing again, slower, with his
hand pointing at the air as it outlines a plan.

                         WILLIAM
               Of course! I must myself enter
               society again, for to catch a
               glimpse of the man, I must move in
               the same circles as he might. I
               must myself accompany Mary to our
               aunt's, for to enter society, I
               must once again prove myself fit.
               I'm sure ... I know I can do this.
               For mine own sanity, I can do this.

His pacing carries him out of the room.

INT. AUBREY AUNT'S FLAT - NIGHT

A moderately large flat in London. A soft rain falls outside,
the wind occasionally blowing it against the window with a
PATTERING sound. The scene is much more sedate than a drawing
-room. Musicians are nowhere to be found; only the CHATTER of
guests is heard.

William sits by himself, in a chair with its back to the wall.
He has kept the beard, but it is neatly trimmed. His clothes
are impeccable, but the bags under his eyes remain. He drinks
from a glass of red wine. His eyes are fixed on Mary, who
stands in another section of the room (separated by an
archway), surrounded by a semicircle of SUITORS.

                         MARY
               No, I'm trying to tell you, the man
               swore it had been a Chianti!

                         SUItoR 1
               But it wasn't?

                         MARY
               Oh, that's really not important.
               The point is, he actually tried to
               convince me that he could
               drink the red out of a wine!

                         SUItoR 2
               And you believed him?

                         MARY
               He's my older brother, how could I
               not? So ... I went through almost
               ten years believing my brother had
               the ability to turn a wine from red
               to white.

They all LAUGH - some more patronizingly than others.

                         SUItoR 2
               I know of only one thing that could
               have the chance to change a red
               wine to white.

                         MARY
               Oh? And just what might hold that
               magic?

                         SUItoR 2
               Your beauty.

Suitor 2 tilts his glass to Mary, then drinks. Mary merely
BLUSHES demurely. More TALKING and LAUGHTER ensues.

Most of the guests who have not circled around Mary have begun
to leave; William observes their departure intently. As the
last few guests make their way out the door, William makes a
decision:

                         WILLIAM
               Time to leave.

He stands and begins to walk to the archway and into the other
room to fetch Mary. He finds her quite unreachable due to the
six or so suitors who have formed a neat little cocoon around
her.

                         WILLIAM
               Excuse me.

He puts his hand on Suitor 2's shoulder, and proceeds to turn
the man around and out of his way.

                         WILLIAM
               Sir, if you'd kindly pardon me so
               that I might get to -

William cuts himself off as he looks into Suitor 2's eyes and
finds he is the same Earl of Marsden that he saw across the
room a month earlier. He stares for a moment into the Earl's
eyes - those eyes in turn GLOW for but a moment.

Mary spots William staring at Marsden.

                         MARY
               Oh, William! I don't believe you've
               had the pleasure of meeting
               Charles, the Earl of Marsden.
               Charles, my brother, William.

William steps into the semicircle of suitors, GRABS his
sister's arm, and drags her away.

                         MARY
               William! William, what are
               you doing? I was talking to those
               gentlemen. William, you're being
               very rude.

He doesn't answer, but continues to force her out of the
apartment. As he descends a final flight of stairs before the
door to the street, a whisper reaches his ear:

                         RUTHVEN'S VOICE
               Remember your oath!

Reaching the night air, William PUSHES his way through the few
servants who remain waiting for their lords and ladies. He
finds his own coach, SHOVES Mary inside, and SLAMS the door
after her.

INT. COACH - DAY

William enters the coach and sits opposite Mary; the coach
begins moving almost immediately. A wild look is in William's
eyes. He gazes out the window as if to check for someone
following them.

                         MARY
               William.

He continues checking out the window.

                         MARY
               William!

                         WILLIAM
               What?

                         MARY
               William, what in the name of the
               Lord has gotten into you? Are you
               still my brother? Do you still care
               about my life, my happiness?

                         WILLIAM
               Yes.

                         MARY
               Do you!?

William finally pulls his head away from the window.

                         WILLIAM
               Yes! Mary, I care for you more
               than, more than ... than you or I
               can possibly imagine! But if ... I
               can't have seen what I have seen.
               Ah, but if you could only know how
               I care, if I could only tell
               you....

                         MARY
               Then tell me, William. Tell me how
               you can ruin my life if you still
               care.

Mary begins to CRY.

                         WILLIAM
               But I do! I do!

Mary's CRYING continues. She is too distraught to continue
questioning her brother. He returns to checking out the
window, still seeming concerned as if something or someone
might be following them close behind.

                         WILLIAM
               I do ... I do....

INT. AUBREY HOME (GARDEN) - EVENING

Mary and the Earl of Marsden sit by the fountain.

                         MARY
               I'm just concerned for his health
               and safety, Charles.

                         MARSDEN
               It's not as if I'm not concerned as
               well, Mary. I mean, I've not had
               the pleasure of meeting your
               brother under brighter
               circumstances, but that doesn't
               mean I don't care for him. Your
               love for him is reason enough for
               me to be concerned, for you do not
               give your love lightly. I only hope
               that one day, I might earn such
               affection from one so fair as you.

Mary SMILES.

                         MARY
               This constant flattery may soon get
               you what you wish.

                         MARSDEN
               Dare I dream?

EXT. LONDON - EVENING

William walks through the filthier streets of the city. A
strong breeze blows his greasy hair in and out of his face at
intervals. He never bothers to brush it away. His clothes have
become ragged and torn, but he doesn't seem to mind. He just
continues to walk at a steady place toward no particular
destination.

                         MARY V.O.
               Dreams were made to come true, in
               my opinion.

                         MARSDEN V.O.
               Well then, I suppose I shall
               continue to dream the very best of
               dreams.

William turns a corner. Two DRUNKARDS stop a CONVERSATION to
stare at him, but he pays them no heed. A few paces past the
drunkards, he MUMBLES something incoherently.

                         MARY V.O.
               I think he's out walking again.
                    (pause)
               Charles, there are often days at a
               time that I don't see him. I have
               no idea where he goes, and he
               refuses to talk to me about it -
               any of it. I've tried to have
               people follow him, but they always
               claim he just disappears from their
               view. I simply can't find any clues
               as to what could possibly be
               troubling him so.

                         MARSDEN V.O.
               Don't you think it's time to get
               him some more reputable help? The
               doctors who have been seeing him
               are not exactly the best available.

EXT. AUBREY HOME (GARDEN) - EVENING

The Earl of Marsden has moved closer to Mary on the bench as
they continue their conversation.

                         MARY
               I think it's more a cost issue than
               anything else. Our guardians have
               never exactly been generous with
               our parents' fortune.
                    (pause)
               I often think they'd rather William
               lose his faculties completely.

                         MARSDEN
               Oh, Mary ... if it's a money issue,
               then it's a non-issue. I'm more
               than happy to assist.

                         MARY
               Charles, I often wonder why you're
               so generous to me.

                         MARSDEN
               You mean it isn't that obvious? I
               always hoped I was subtle, but
               never thought I actually was.

Mary SMILES at the comment. Marsden slowly leans in and KISSES
her softly on the cheek. Mary, however, turns his face, and
the KISS soon turns passionate.

EXT. LONDON - EVENING.

William stops walking. He turns around and begins walking in
the other direction.

INT. AUBREY HOME (WILLIAM'S ROOM) - AFTERNOON

William lies in his bed, looking simply awful. A well-dressed
DOCTOR stands over him, lifting his closed eyelids one by one,
as Mary looks on. William is unresponsive.

                         DOCTOR
               How long did you say he's been back
               from his trip?

                         MARY
               Oh, let's see.... I think it's been
               nearly ten months now.

                         DOCTOR
               And how long has he been in this
               condition?

                         MARY
               I'm not entirely certain, doctor.
               That is, he's slipped in and out of
               this melancholia for the past six
               months. Sometimes he seems
               perfectly normal, coherent, other
               times....

Mary trails off and rubs her eyes wearily.

                         DOCTOR
               I see. I'm sorry, Miss Aubrey ... I
               just have a few more questions.

                         MARY
               I understand.

                         DOCTOR
               When he's been more ... coherent,
               did he try to interact with you,
               with his friends? 

                         MARY
               That's really when it got most
               frightening. He would seem fine at
               first. Except for his looks. His
               eyes haven't seemed quite right
               since before he ever left on that
               trip. So I guess everyone was sort
               of suspicious of him when he
               entered a room.

INT. DRAWING ROOM - NIGHT

Flashback. A moderately crowded drawing-room, with the
standard string ensemble and guests. William walks in from a
side room, looking less than his best. His dress is formal,
but it looks as if it was hung on him. The large bags droop
below his bloodshot eyes and his hair - rather long now -
hangs loosely about his face. The only sound we hear is the
continuance of Mary's conversation with the doctor.

                         MARY V.O.
               Not that he didn't give a need for
               that suspicion. It's no doubt that
               his actions have been peculiar for
               months. He would wander around all
               day ... usually return at night to
               sleep in his own bed. Sometimes,
               though, he'd disappear for days ...
               never giving any indication as to
               where he'd been once he returned.
               It got to be so we were forced to
               keep him here, in his room, under
               lock and key. But then, like I
               said, he'd show signs of coherence,
               so we'd do our best to let him go
               as he pleased. Anyway, when he'd
               accompany me to drawing-rooms and
               the like, he'd usually act normally
               for a while, though he'd keep
               somewhat to himself.

William begins to wander about the room. He just observes at
first, but eventually he starts approaching individual guests,
animatedly speaking to them, and gesturing wildly.

                         MARY V.O. (Cont.)
               Eventually, as the night
               progressed, he would start going
               around to the guests and
               warning them of their
               impending doom. He never got
               specific about anything, what form
               the doom was going to take, when
               exactly it was impending, and so
               forth. If anyone was actually brave
               enough to engage William, ask him
               what danger exactly was in their
               midst, his only response would be -

                         WILLIAM
               True! True!

                         MARY V.O. (Cont.)
               Which was the same answer he'd give
               me whenever I questioned him about
               anything.
                    (pause)
               Um, meaning, of course, he's given
               me the same warnings of my doom.
               Keeps warning me "not to go near
               him," "if you have any love for me
               left in you, do not touch him,"
               things like that.

INT. AUBREY HOME (WILLIAM'S ROOM) - AFTERNOON

The doctor looks up from William and turns to Mary.

                         MARY
               Lately, he's taken to counting when
               I come in.

                         DOCTOR
               Counting?

                         MARY
               Yes. Like he'll mark off a number,
               count it out on his fingers. Seems
               like he's trying to calculate
               something, I don't know. So he'll
               count out some number and then just
               smile. I mean, it's not much, but
               at least I still get to see him
               smile.

                         DOCTOR
               When's the wedding, Mary?

Mary SMILES gleefully.

                         MARY
               This time tomorrow, doctor.

                         DOCtoR
               You do understand that William will
               simply not be in any condition to
               attend?

The smile quickly fades from Mary's face.

                         MARY
               I can always dream. If there is
               anything my future husband has
               taught me, it's that there is never
               harm in dreaming.

The doctor walks to Mary and leads her out of the room with a
hand on her shoulder. William lies alone in bed.

                         DOCTOR (O.S.)
               In this case, I fear there is. I'd
               recommend keeping this room well
               guarded tomorrow. If you wish your
               wedding to occur without incident,
               your brother is not to
               attend under any circumstance, no
               matter how much you may desire it.

William's eyes pop open.

                         MARY (O.S.)
               I suppose you're right.

                         WILLIAM
               Wedding?

EXT. AUBREY HOME (GARDEN) - MORNING

The garden is made up in spectacular fashion for Mary's
wedding. Rows of chairs are set out in an open area. It seems
as if the entire garden is in bloom on this one day. SERVANTS
still set up a few last minute items: food on tables that line
the exterior of the garden, a few flowers along the sides of
the path that lead through the rows of chairs, a wooden plank
that serves as a stage in front of a row of flowering bushes.

INT. AUBREY HOME (WILLIAM'S ROOM) - MORNING

William sits on his bed. He is clean-shaven and well-dressed,
but still has a wild look in his eyes. A LARGE SERVANT stands
in his room, in front of a closed door.

                         WILLIAM
               Don't be absurd! This is my own
               sister's wedding for God's sake!

                         LARGE SERVANT
               I'm sorry, Master Aubrey. I have
               strict orders from your guardians,
               Miss Aubrey, and the Earl of
               Marsden, that you are not to -

                         WILLIAM
               Do not say that name! I never want
               to hear that name uttered from your
               or anyone else's mouth when in my
               presence! Should I hear you speak
               that vile name again, I'll be
               certain to wring your neck!

                         LARGE SERVANT
               As you wish.

The servant knocks three times on the door behind him, and it
opens a crack to allow him egress. William SNEERS after the
servant.

                         WILLIAM
               Addle-minded fool.

William walks over to his window, which overlooks the garden.
He watches the preparations proceed for his sister's wedding
and frowns.

INT. AUBREY HOME (OUTSIDE WILLIAM'S ROOM) - MORNING

The large servant and another GUARD stand outside the door,
talking.

                         LARGE SERVANT
               I tell you, the man has simply lost
               his mind. He just threatened to
               kill me.

                         GUARD
               Oh, he did not!

                         LARGE SERVANT
               Sure as I'm standing on this spot
               here and now he did. Threatened to
               throttle me if I mentioned the
               Earl's name to him.
                    (pause)
               I feel sorry for the lad, not being
               able to attend his sister's wedding
               and all, but there's got to be
               better ways of going about this.

Three KNOCKS sound on the door to William's room.

                         GUARD
               Now what's this?

                         LARGE SERVANT
                    (to door)
               What is it this time, Master
               Aubrey? You know I can't let you
               out of there, sorry though I may be
               on it.

                         WILLIAM (O.S.)
               No, no ... I understand. It's not
               that. Under the door.

The guard looks down to the floor under the door as a neatly
folded sheet of paper is slipped out beneath it.

                         WILLIAM (O.S.)
               You'll be sure my sister gets that,
               won't you? I mean, it's the least I
               can be allowed, right? My only
               sister's wedding ... I can accept
               being stuck in this room, but can
               you at least deliver this to her?

The guard kneels down picks up the paper just as the doctor
approaches.

                         GUARD
               I'll see that it's done, sir.

                         WILLIAM (O.S.)
               Thank you, oh thank you kindly. You
               have my word, then, I won't be any
               more trouble. I won't need to be.

                         GUARD
               Um, certainly, sir.

The doctor grabs the paper out of the guard's hands.

                         DOCTOR
               What's this?

                         LARGE SERVANT
               Letter, I guess. Master Aubrey
               wants it delivered to his sister.
               We were just about to go and give
               it to her.

                         DOCTOR
               I'll be the judge of that.

He scans the letter.

                         DOCTOR (Cont.)
               Best not to give this to her. I
               don't think on the day of her
               wedding that Miss Aubrey ought to
               be any further harassed by the
               ravings of a madman such as her
               brother.

The doctor walks away. The guard shrugs.

INT. AUBREY HOME (WILLIAM'S ROOM) - AFTERNOON

William reclines on his bed, looking a bit better than he did
earlier. He seems almost relaxed. Eventually, the sound of
approaching HORSES can be heard out his window. He lifts his
head with a questioning look on his face.

Slowly, he rises from the bed and makes his way to the window.
He cranes his neck to see outside.

                         WILLIAM
               It can't be!

INSERT (EXT. AUBREY HOME - AFTERNOON): Several carriages
arrive at the front of the house. Well-dressed lords and
ladies exit and make their way back to the garden.

                         WILLIAM
               Damn!

He begins PACING about the room, hands grasping his head.

INT. AUBREY HOME (OUTSIDE WILLIAM'S ROOM) - AFTERNOON

Only the one guard remains outside the door. Sound of BUSY
PREPARATION waft up from other areas of the house. The guard
keeps walking down the hall, attempting to hear the various
bits of conversation. He has obviously grown bored with his
task.

Eventually, an older WOMAN SERVANT happens by. The guard stops
her in her path.

                         GUARD
               Excuse me ... it's Genevieve,
               right?

                         GENEVIEVE
               That's right.

                         GUARD
               Genevieve, I'm wondering if you
               might be willing to do me a little
               favor for a few minutes?

                         GENEVIEVE
               What's that?

                         GUARD
               Could you just watch this door
               while I take a peek out at the
               garden? I've just got to know what
               the crowd out there looks like - I
               keep hearing from the others
               walking by here, but I'm supposed
               to watch the door, keep Master
               Aubrey from coming out and spoiling
               his sister's affair. You know how
               he's been.

Genevieve SMILES.

                         GENEVIEVE
               Oh, I don't think he'll be any
               trouble. You go ahead, watch the
               ceremony if you like. I've seen
               plenty of weddings for a while
               anyway.

                         GUARD
               Much obliged ... I'll do my best
               not to be long.

The guard turns to walk away.

INT. AUBREY HOME (WILLIAM'S ROOM) - AFTERNOON

William stands with his ear to the door, listening to the
conversation on the other side.

                         GENEVIEVE (O.S.)
               You take your time.

William runs over to his window and looks out at the garden
below. Through his window, we can see that the various guests
have all assembled; the wedding is set to begin shortly.
William paces away from the window, returns to take a second
glance, then makes up his mind.

With a few steps to get up some speed, he RUNS full force and
THROWS his body against the door. The door flies open almost
as if it were never locked. On the other side, Genevieve is
KNOCKED into the wall, and drops to the ground, out cold.
William walks briskly out of his room and pays her no heed.

INT. AUBREY HOME (STAIRWAY) - AFTERNOON

At the bottom of the stairway, a few servants make some last
-minute preparations. The Earl of Marsden stands obscured by a
door that opens onto the garden.

At the top of the stairway, William rounds a corner, slips,
and runs into a wall with a SMASH. The servants and the Earl
all turn their heads to the sound. William regains his balance
and begins to make his way NOISILY down the stairs.

The Earl notices his descent, and quickly walks to the
stairwell. GRABBING William forcefully by the arm, he hurries
him back up to the top of the stairs. The servants return to
their duties as if nothing has happened.

                         MARSDEN
               Remember your oath, William ... and
               know, if not my bride today, you
               sister is dishonored. Women are
               frail!

William is speechless. His entire body begins to QUIVER; he
would collapse if Marsden did not retain his tight grip on his
arm.

The large servant and guard come running down the hallway.
Marsden looks up at them, then tosses William to them as if he
were nothing more than a rag doll.

                         MARSDEN
               See that he doesn't get out again.
               I don't want my bride to see him in
               this condition.

                         GUARD
               Yes, sir.

They carry him away. A servant calls from the bottom of the
stairwell.

                         SERVANT
               Master Charles; they're ready for
               you now.

Marsden proceeds slowly down the stairs.

INT. AUBREY HOME (WILLIAM'S ROOM) - MORNING

William lies in bed, a blanket pulled up to his chin. His face
is quite red, bloodshot eyes are open, staring straight ahead.
He seems to be struggling merely to breathe.

After a moment, the doctor enters. He leads Christian into the
room.

                         DOCTOR
               I'm afraid I doubt he has much left
               in him. He asked to see you.

                         CHRISTIAN
               Thank you, doctor.

The doctor exits. Christian slowly approaches William's
bedside.

                         CHRISTIAN
               William?

William is slow to respond. Sweat streams down his face. He
finally struggles to speak.

                         WILLIAM
               Mary's wedding. Went forward, I
               assume?

                         CHRISTIAN
               Certainly. A beautiful ceremony.
               From what I was told.

                         WILLIAM
               The bride and bridegroom?

                         CHRISTIAN
               In Paris. To return in about a
               month, I believe.

William CHOKES for an instant, and the redness in his face
increases to unbelievable levels.

                         WILLIAM
               They will not return.

                         CHRISTIAN
               William, please ... for once,
               explain yourself, I implore you.

William CHOKES again. This time, a trickle of blood spills out
his nose. A moment later, he attempts to speak again, but it
only comes out as another CHOKE. A red-stained tear spills out
of his eye. He struggles to get out his last words:

                         WILLIAM
               The vampyre!

EXT. PARIS - NIGHT

A FULL MOON shines brilliantly.

INT. PARIS INN - NIGHT

A set of glowing eyes flash bright red. In the dim light, a
man's figure swoops down, attacking a woman lying on a bed. A
SCREAM pierces the silence.

FADE OUT.

 

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