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Following are excerpts from a few e-mails that we have received regarding our Seinfeld script. We've consciously chosen to remove names and return e-mail addresses to respect the privacy of those who have sent us this e-mail. Thanks for all the feedback!

Mike and Glen,

I just read "The Slaw". I enjoyed it very much. The characterization was dead on and the conversation was trivial, resulting in a work of Seinfeldian perfection. Did you guys ever try to crack the iron gates of the Seinfeld office? I have also written a Seinfeld spec script, "Bink", but they wouldn't even look at it. If you're interested, "Bink" should show up on Yahoo by next week. Unfortunately, as an HTML beginner, my format is crappy.

Thanks for sharing your work

I just wanted to say that I really enjoy The Slaw! How can someone like me get a chance to have a script aired? Thank you.

I read intently your script entitled "The Slaw". I found it enlightening to see the paucity of words which get the point across.

I read your 'Slaw" script. Sounds like a typical Seinfeld episode. Even if they read it, and liked it, do you think they would contact you?? Don't they have writers? If they are paying the writers, why would they buy your script? Have you ever heard of someone having an episode bought? How much would you charge? Would you allow them to alter it?? I sound like a 3 year old -- Why??, Why daddy, why?? anyway, just curious

Hi. I read your script THE SLAW and liked it. I, myself, am working on a SEINFELD spec, and other specs.

we read your script "The Slaw" over lunch today and enjoyed immensely. it's far superior to the other scripts on the Web these days. had a good laugh. hope to see more in the future.

thanks for putting your spec script on the web. my friend and i are also into writing seinfeld specs - we've just finished our third one. reading what you guys did has given us all of the inspiration and validation that we could ever possibly hope to ask for as long as we live. we now know what goes into a good (dare i say it, terrific) spec script: proper formatting; a true knowledge of the characters and the way they speak; a knowledge of the proper length of a half-hour sitcom; believable situations; and of course, a good idea. it's nice to know just how much talent we have.

thanks again guys.

[Yes, I suppose this could be read as insultingly sarcastic, but we've decided to be optimistic and read it as a compliment! —Ed.]

Hello,

Came across your page, and the Seinfeld script. Nice work!

Hilarious. Simply brilliant. Nuff said. ;)

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